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Old Dec 22, 03
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Junglist Rhyme II

Alone with my thoughts
to magnify my dreams
with the purpose anger brought
to orchestrate schemes
scars have meaning
meaning brings scars
I set my goals high
above the sky
to touch stars

Searching for the Deity
to touch me with His drive
as I keep for focus sharp
and my soul more alive
fight to strive and contrive
the path I wanna set
giving it my all
my body ripples with sweat

Grasp the definition
of my morality
giving meaning to the sound
and my humanity
choosing proper syntax
omitting prophanity
as the 3rd eye stays open
I keep my sanity

I'm meticulous
as I rupture your anatomy
with the skills I learned
at the Junglist Academy
disrupting the fantasy
unveiling the fallacy
as the anger grows
in your soul fanatically

Mechanically
you put your finger on the trigger
looking for the mark
that made the lies bigger
when it isn't one person
that rocked your mental state
but whispers in the shadows
that want to proliferate

the choreographed dance
designing their deception
that made you ignorant
since the time of conception
dulling your mind
to lack any of the comprehension
that you have been inslaved
without any of the apprehension

But we will teach them
with the lessons we drop
bustin out the flow
with the weapons we brought
grab the mic firmly
cuz I want to rock
momentum starts to build
we cannot be stopped

Our speed is pickin up
with every mix and cut
bass so thick
my eyes are swollen shut
but that's the way I need to be
on the microphone
in order to gain strength
from JC the cornerstone.

Last edited by OzziusAtreides; Dec 27, 03 at 02:09 AM.
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Old Dec 22, 03
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Join Date: Oct 2002
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i showed clear distaste for your other "rhyme" u posted a lil while ago... but i am impressed with this one. Good word selektion and nice flow:)
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