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May 27, 01
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Drinking and Smoking up
My friend emailed this to me.. it's a sad story..
>>>>This Will Make You Cry... >>>>Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. >>>>For once in her life 'twas on the right side of town. >>>>She unpacked her things with such great ease. >>>>As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. >>>>How wonderful it was to have her own room. >>>>School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. >>>>There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy >>>>It's just the way she wanted her life to be. >>>>On the first day of school, everything went great. >>>>She made new friends and even got a date! >>>>She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, >>>>Because I just got a date with the star of the team!" >>>>To be known in this school you had to have a clout, >>>>And dating this guy would sure help her out. >>>>There was only one problem stopping her fate. >>>>Her parents had said she was too young to date. >>>>"Well, I just won't tell them the entire truth. >>>>They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" >>>>Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night. >>>>Her parents frowned but said, "All right." >>>>Excited, she got ready for the big event >>>>But as she rushed around like she had no sense, >>>>She began to feel guilty about all the lies, >>>>But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride? >>>>Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the >>>>moonlight ride would have to wait. >>>>For Jeff was half drunk by this time. >>>>But he kissed her and said that he was just fine. >>>>Then the room filled with smoked and Jeff took a puff. >>>>Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff. >>>>Now Jeff was ready to ride to the point >>>>But only after he'd smoked another joint. >>>>They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, >>>>Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive. >>>>They finally made it to the point at last, >>>>And Jeff started trying to make a pass. >>>>A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all >>>>(And by a pass, I don't mean playing football.) >>>>"Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young. >>>>Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb." >>>>With all of her might, she pushed Jeff say away: >>>>"Please take me home, I don't want to stay." >>>>Jeff cranked up the engine and floored the gas. >>>>In a matter of seconds they were going too fast. >>>>As Jeff drove on in a fit of wild anger, >>>>Jenny knew that her life was in danger. >>>>She begged and pleaded for him to slow down, >>>>But he just got faster as they neared the town. >>>>"Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied. >>>>I really went out for a moonlight ride." >>>>Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash. >>>>"Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!" >>>>She doesn't remember the force of impact. >>>>Just that everything all of a sudden went black. >>>>She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, >>>>And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble! >>>>Voices she heard...a few words at best. >>>>But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. >>>>Then wondered to herself if Jeff was all right, >>>>And if the people in the other car was alive. >>>>She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. >>>>"You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." >>>>These voices echoed inside her head, >>>>As they gently told her that Jeff was dead. >>>>They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do. >>>>But it looks as if we'll lose you too." >>>>"But the people in the other car!? "Jenny cried. >>>>"We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." >>>>Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done >>>>I only wanted to have just one night of fun." >>>>"Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, >>>>And wish I could return their families to them." >>>>"Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, >>>>And that it's my fault so many have died. >>>>Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" >>>>The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. >>>>But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes. >>>>And a few moments later Jenny died. >>>>A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best >>>>To bid that girl her one last request?" >>>>She looked at the man with eyes so sad. >>>>"Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad." >>>>This story is sad and unpleasant but true, >>>>So young people take heed, it could have been you. 
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May 27, 01
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wow dats so sad.... it totally sent a shiver down my spine.... AAHH...
...GRRR...
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May 27, 01
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ya same...
i think i might cry.....that's so sad......:102:
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May 27, 01
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yeah the irony did send chills up my spine as well.
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May 27, 01
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that was sad... and the ending was kinda unexpected... i like it...
kinda makes you think twice.. but i think its a lil exagerrated.. well maybe i'm just being naive about this.. but ive been in the car with drunken ppl or ppl that were smoking up and they drive just fine.... i think ppl can drive when they are high though.. never bothered me... some ppl drive better when they are high though.. but its pretty stupid of me.. knowing that my driver is drunk and still letting them drive me home.. sometimes i'm just really desperate for a ride home and i dont care as long as i get home... i dunno... i guess i'm pretty lucky nothing has happened to me yet.. i guess i dont really take life that seriously.. and im stupid to make choices i know i will regret later or if anything bad happens. but i do it anyways. careless. thats the word i'm lookinf for... i dunno. drinking and driving is stupid. i know tonsa ppl that have been victims of it.. and almost always.. its the passengers in the car that die...
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May 29, 01
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kinda scarey too in a way
yeah i gots those chills too :TT:
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May 29, 01
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I saw the ending coming, but yet I was still surprised at the end. Good story. Very well written.
Drinking and driving is not cool. I have friends that do that all the time and they just do not realize what could happen. There is an exception to every rule, but shit happens. Why take the risk??? -Dwight:Somatic:
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May 29, 01
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some one e-mailed me this and i remembered this thread so i thougght i'll post it
near the door he paused to stand as he took his class ring off her hand all who were watchin did not speak as a slient tear ran down his cheek and through his mind the memories ran of the moments they walked and ran in the sand hand in hand but now her eyes were so terribly cold for he would never ahain have her to hold they watched in silence as he bent near and whispered the words... "i love you" in her ear he touched her face and started to cry as he put on his ring and wanted to die and just then the wind began to blow as they lowered her casket into the snow this is what happends to men alive when friends let friends drink and drive this is sad and iduno what i would do if anything like this happen to any of my friends... to all of u out there that drive.. be careful and dont drink and drive... :370:...xoxo...:370: Last edited by Psycho-RavEr; May 29, 01 at 07:43 PM.
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May 30, 01
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awww...i've read both those poems before and i do like them.
the saddest thing abuot them is that they can be true so..just becareful people!! :Lazee:
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Jun 01, 01
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I had already read the second one and that was so sad but the first one even though i kinda knew the ending , it almost made my cry. I don't understand why ppl drink and drive , but pls ppl never get yourself in a situtation where u have a chance of losing your life .
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Jun 01, 01
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fuck man those poems really make u think really hard
even tho i've never drank and drove and never will it so scares the shit outta me, but thinking about the insodent that happened to me today, i consider myself lucky im still here.....
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