Bitter Much???

[Cdn_Brdr]

I was sitting around last night doing all of nothing and ot of nowhere I got this little thought in my head and wrote it down.

The poison of words not yet said
and promises not yet broken
drips from your cruel tongue
as the stench of heartless envy
steeps from your lizards skin

Am I angry about something?:pissed:
I must be.... either way I think thats a pretty good start to some sort of poem or what not....
Opinions?

[All!e]

mmmmm ?! i dunno

[sebcoe]

sounds like some one needs a hug OK

pLuR fRoM mE 2 U aNd bEyOnD

[Sir_K]

verry good

[Breezy]

depressing... but something I could relate to~
props, it's a good start I think... jus write your heart out even if it doesn't make any sense it's all good....

and your spiderman dude scares me! lol :p