Oct 14, 02
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Actions from before
Created me today... HUSH YOUR SCORN! UNderstand me through a narrow mind Comprehenesion hard to find. Bind narrow mind, Seal it with a kiss Ignorance Once was bliss Witness knowledge drip from my lips Thick like honey Bitter tatse This is reality.... Do not turn back in haste Blundering onward Drunken stooper Voyeur me! Un inhibited... Free. Quench ur thirst from my urn Lessons u shall receive in turn. Value the fire And the morals that force it to burn. Blow with all ur might Blow with all ur will Fuel my rage INflicting sin You wishing u never did begin... Or end I shall send Youreself on ur way Shaking ur head in disbeleif of what I say Rememeber what I said. IN hopes future use. Shat not be misled Oh how the bloody bled. How the tainted bleed How the infected follow through for such meager deeds. hate was fed. Altho hate ended up malnourished and dead. BLIND ME HERE AND NOW! no reason why no explanation how onward yee shall plow Silence now. Do not disrupt my peace Disruption brings defeat! Either way I win You never did end You never did begin. Neutral and futile Emotion bubbling like bile Wicked little smile... I HAVE BEEN THE MISTRESS OF STRINGS FOR A WHILE!!! all hail she Valentine the vixen Bows gracefully. Curtain down Bring on the clowns Shower me with long stemmed prim roses Pupil strikes mischevious poses.  :smoke1:
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Oct 14, 02
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mediocre.
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Oct 14, 02
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bless me with less of a mediocre verse
bless me now b4 i is cursed U know the first time I heard of the mediocre word I was in garde 2 readin the sunday funnys...ther cahrlie brown comic...lucy called charlie born mediocre because of his pitching capabilities in base ball
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Oct 14, 02
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/me yawns
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Oct 15, 02
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*~*goddesa*~stabs stabbys rice in hopes that it will say "GOT RICE BITCH"???!!!!*****
molestah me timmothyah
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Oct 15, 02
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Wow, you sure showed me.
Is racism supposed to offend me? Maybe if I didn't make the comments "Got Rice?" to my few Asian friends. Your rhymes just aren't that interesting. Sorry.
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Oct 15, 02
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IM SURROUNDED BY FEEBS!!!!!
arent azn people suppose to be smart? Or is that like another stereotypical comment? Racist comment? fuckin feebs jesus maria and Guiseppe and wy didnt u come at me with some stereotypical Italian slurs? perhaps u dont know any but I will inform u. GUINEY, DAEGO, WOP=WITH OUT PASSPORT a term thrown upon us by good old Aerrrikkkan folkkk. uhmmmm but wop in Itlia is a compliment wop in Italia=well dressed,rich, etc... Ill ask my dad for more terms and translations...o wait yah apparently all Mediteranean people r hairy? But u kno what I heard of lady bic and stuff. At the moment I be waxin .Nadz makes u burn LIK A MU FUCKAH!!! NADS=NO NO (yes nads as seen on tv)uhmmm hmmmmm I dunno?! Jew tell meh
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Oct 15, 02
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Goddessa,
Please watch your language. You have been warned.
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Oct 15, 02
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come at me with some more poetic devices... I was never one for poetic devices in fact all arbitrary writing devices digust me. Takes the fun out of writing u know! stab_my_rice I would love to see some poetry and or prose from u and or art work?! I absolutely adore people who can express them selves IN creative ways:keebler: hop away now young asshopper*gong*
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Oct 15, 02
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I don't have anything to prove to you. I don't have to think of racial slurs to insult you or make you look like a fool, you do a fine job yourself thank you.
My poetry and writing is private to me, I write it for me only, not for show and tell. Me, express myself in creative ways? Don't count on it... ha... hahaha. I don't have any artistic talent -- nothing compared to your work I'm sure. Stab_my_rice_with_a_fork.
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Oct 15, 02
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hence I AM SURROUNDED BY FEEBS
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Oct 20, 02
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k u guys gotta chill....everybody expresses themselves in different ways....and if you feel as tho u want to share what u write...u can...and if you dont want to u dont have to...but we dont need to get into racism and all that shit....everyones writing is different...someone may like one thing and another hate it...but its just the writer expressing themselves....and i do like your work godessa....it shows creativity....and i enjoyed it
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Oct 20, 02
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grazie
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Oct 20, 02
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goddessa...you have really fat fingers.
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Oct 20, 02
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thats what all that damned liquor does 2 yah
I AM A FACIST WOP ALKI-HO-LIK
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Oct 20, 02
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liquor/too much body fat...what's the diff
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Oct 21, 02
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hi my name is goddessa and im a racist facist alki-holik
listen if u guys arent going to comment on my poetry and just wanna talk smizack do so in zee toilet bowellll dont ruin muh poetry threads porfavore
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Oct 21, 02
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actually i'll talk "smizack' anywhere i want, thank you very much. besides...ruining your poetry? sweetie, i'd hardly call that poetry. but whatever floats your boat...keep at it, practice makes perfect. and in your case, you can only get better. *golf clap*
2 cheers for swollen fingahs! -s
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Oct 21, 02
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get out of town! cuz you're MY hero. what a coincidence!
-s
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Oct 25, 02
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man.....can everyone just fuckin get along....:(.....*sigh* ed whut?
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