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  #26 (permalink)  
Old Jan 14, 03
sooo fucken ugly
 
Join Date: May 2001
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Quote:
Originally posted by Twista
And John Donne IS the Father of all Love poems :027:
atleast someone knows where it is at.

Seriously, I can't see how anybody could dislike valediction, forbidding morning. That poem is sooooooOOOOooo romantic. If some chick wrote that for me, you would see me melt as I read it..
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Old Jan 21, 03
i really look like this!
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
Theory of a Deadman-Make up your mind
(it's just a real good song)

Make up your mind and I'll make up mine
Don't worry about me, I'll be fine
Those words that you said to me, why wasn't I listening?
I wish I hadn't met you at all, I started thinking
I'll sit back and relax and wait for the morning

We'll wake up, we'll make up and do this for the last time
We'll wake up, we'll make up and do this for the last time
If we break up, we'll wind up losing both of our minds
So wake up, let's make up and do this for the last time

Make up your mind and I'll make up mine
Don't worry about me, I'll be fine
The last time you yelled at me I swore that I heard you say
I wish I hadn't met you at all, I started thinking
I'l sit back and relax and wait for the morning

We'll wake up, we'll make up and do this for the last time
We'll wake up, we'll make up and do this for the last time
If we break up, we'll wind up losing both of our minds
So wake up, let's make up and do this for the last time

When will we make up, will we break up?
Let's wake up, let's wake up, let's wake up

Make up your mind and I'll make up mine
Don't worry about me, I'll be fine
Those words that you said to me, why wasn't I listening?
I wish I hadn't met you at all, I started thinking

We'll wake up, we'll make up and do this for the last time
We'll wake up, we'll make up and do this for the last time
If we break up, we'll wind up losing both of our minds
So wake up, let's make up and do this for the last time
Let's wake up, let's make up and do this
for the last time
If we break up, we'll wind up losing both of our minds
Let's wake up, let's make up
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Old Jan 21, 03
i really look like this!
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
"Love story"

It was easy to see what he was up to,
the grey, bundled ape,
as he sidled half-playfully
up to the baby
and with a sly look behind
put his hands onto the crib
and leapt in.

The child's pink, beginning face
stared up as the hair-handed monkey
explord the flesh, so soft, of our infant race.
The belly spread like plush to the monkey's haunch,
he settled, heavy and gay, his nuzzling
mouth at the baby's neck.

But no answer accurate to a smile,
he bit, tasted time, maddened,
and his nails rooted sudden fire in the ribs of Adam,
towered, carnivorous, for aim
and baby face, ears, arm
were torn and taken in his ravaging.

And so the killing, too-late parents came,
hysteric, after their child's
futile pulse had stopped its beating.
Only the half-pathetic, half-triumphant
monkey peered out form the crib,
bobbed nervously on the dead infant's belly,
then stopped, suddenly paralyzed on that soft tomb.

Was it the donkey Death brayed out at him
from the human mother's eyes,
or did his love for her in that pause
consume him?

The jealous ape's death was swift
and of natural cause. 'Died of shame,'
some said, others, 'of shock.'
But his death was Othello's death,
as great, as picayune,
he died of envy, lacking the knack of wisdom.

-Phyllis Webb

out of a whole course this was one of the only ones I truly enjoyed.
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Old Jan 22, 03
sooo fucken ugly
 
Join Date: May 2001
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^^

not much of a love poem.
but very good poem indeed.
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Old Jan 22, 03
i really look like this!
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
I picked it out because it was one of my favorites readings in my book.. It isn't a typical "love story" in that it isn't romantic, in fact, it's kind of brutally ironic.. Perhaps it's easy to conclude that it revolves more around jeaousy than love, but i personaly think that "love"is the central idea... (in my interpretation)

I see it as an ironic poem about a monkey who, like any other human, craved to be loved, to experience love. It is ironic in a sense that when he finally experiences love, it drives him to his death. His mistake was in believing that putting himself in the physical place of the baby, would allow him to experience love as the baby did for his mother. Only AFTER brutally tearing the baby to shreds does he reach an epiphany. The realization that love cannot be replaced. Only then, when he looked into the horrified eyes of the mother did he understand the true nature of love...

“he died of envy, lacking the knack of wisdom”.
i just thought it was neat.. love poems need not be mushey.
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Old Jan 22, 03
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what love is in a poem that you copy out of a book?
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Old Jan 22, 03
i really look like this!
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
^ the theme is love,
and why can't it be?
unless you're the type of person that believes that the poet doesn't at all lose authority over his poem once it has been read... and the reader should not take it to his/her own interpretation
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Old Jan 22, 03
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the only person who should share his love for someone else to the whole world is barry white

I've heard people say that
Too much of anything is not good for you, baby
Oh no
But I don't know about that
There's many times that we've loved
We've shared love and made love
It doesn't seem to me like it's enough
There's just not enough of it
There's just not enough
Oh oh, babe

(sung)
My darling, I can't get enough of your love babe
Girl, I don't know, I don't know why
Can't get enough of your love babe
Oh, some things I can't get used to
No matter how I try
Just like the more you give, the more I want
And baby, that's no lie
Oh no, babe

Tell me, what can I say?
What am I gonna do?
How should I feel when everything is you?
What kind of love is this that you're givin' me?
Is it in your kiss or just because you're sweet?

Girl, all I know is every time you're here
I feel the change
Somethin' moves
I scream your name
Do whatcha got to do (?)

Darling, I can't get enough of your love babe
Girl, I don't know, I don't know, I don't know why
I can't get enough of your love babe
Oh no, babe

Girl, if I could only make you see
And make you understand
Girl, your love for me is all I need
And more than I can stand
Oh well, babe

How can I explain all the things I feel?
You've given me so much
Girl, you're so unreal
Still I keep loving you
More and more each time
Girl, what am I gonna do
Because you blow my mind

I get the same old feelin' every time you're here
I feel the change
Somethin' moves
I scream your name
Do whatcha got to do (?)

Darling, I can't get enough of your love babe
Oh no, babe

(spoken)
Baby, let me take all of my life to find you
But you can believe it's gonna take the rest of my life to keep you

(sung)
Oh no, babe
My darling, I can't get enough of your love babe
Yeah, I don't know, I don't know, I don't know why
Can't get enough of your love babe
Oh my darling, I can't get enough of your love babe
Oh babe
I don't know, I don't know, I don't know why
I can't get enough of your love babe
Oh babe


word
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  #34 (permalink)  
Old Jan 22, 03
i really look like this!
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
sapp-yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
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Old Jan 22, 03
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love is as simple or complex as you want it to be. that's the beauty of love. it's whatever you make it. it's what you create for yourself to feel.

"it's like a psychadelic utopia in your brain dude" [quoting the voices in my head]

i love love. don't you love love yoko*? let's have a love parade and love love as the floats float by.
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Old Jan 22, 03
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OH MORE BARRY WHITE

Baby, it’s really amazing what I go through without you
You know sometimes I find myself counting
Counting the hours, the minutes, the seconds, the moments

Darling, please don’t make me wait too long
I wanna love you, baby
Can’t you see it’s only you I want
And you I need

Please don’t make me wait too long
I wanna love you, baby
Can’t you see it’s only you I want
And you I need

When I’m away from you
Seems like forever, yeah
Girl, if you only knew
What I go through without you

But knowing in a moment I’ll
I’ll see that face and see your smile (Give it here)
I turn the key (Give it here), open up the door (Give it here)
Girl, there you are, I can’t take much more

Darling, please don’t make me wait too long
I wanna love you, baby
Can’t you see it’s only you I want
And you I need

Please don’t make me wait too long
I wanna love you, baby
Can’t you see it’s only you I want
You I need

You’re in my arms again
And heaven is waiting
Ah…one more kiss and then
Then I’ll begin, I’ll be makin’

Making you feel inside
Happy, please and so satisfied (Give it here)
No friends to pack (Give it here) and no phones calls (Give it here)
You got what I want, girl, I want it all

Darling, please don’t make me wait too long
I wanna love you, baby
Can’t you see it’s only you I want
And you I need

Please , girl, don’t make me wait too long
I wanna love you, baby
Can’t you see it’s only you I want
And you I need

Please don’t make me
Girl, don’t make me, make me
(It’s only you I want, I want)

Please (Don’t make me wait too long, too long)
(It’s only you I want, I want)
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  #37 (permalink)  
Old Jan 22, 03
i really look like this!
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
Quote:
Originally posted by bob

i love love. don't you love love yoko*? let's have a love parade and love love as the floats float by.
:Serotonin
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  #38 (permalink)  
Old Jan 22, 03
 
Join Date: Dec 2001
*STARFISH* is on a distinguished road
me thinks
love stinks


the end! :c-tard: hehehehe
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Old Jan 22, 03
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Quote:
Originally posted by yoko*
:Serotonin
what?
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Old Jan 22, 03
i really look like this!
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
Quote:
Originally posted by bob
what?
:185:
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Old Jan 22, 03
i really look like this!
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
The Poem Rising By Its Own Weight

The singing robes fly onto your body and cling there silkily
you step out on the rope and move unfalteringly across it,

and seize the fiery knives unscathed and
keep them spinning above you, a fountain
of rhythmic rising, falling, rising
flames,

and proudly let the chains
be wound about you, ready
to shed them, link by steel link,
padlock by padlock---
but when your graceful
confident shrug and twist drives the metal
into your flesh and the python grip of it tightens
and you see rust on the chains and blood in your pores
and you roll
over and down a steepness into a dark hole
and there is not even the sound of mockery in the distant air
somewhere above you where the sky was,
no sound but your own breath panting:
then it is that the miracle
walks in, on his swift feet,
down the precipice straight into the cave,
opens the locks,
knots of chain fall open,
twists of chain unwind themselves,
links fall asunder,
in seconds there is a heap of scrap-
metal at your ankles, you step free and at once
he turns to go-

but as you catch at him with a cry,
clasping his knees, sobbing your gratitude,
with what radiant joy he turns to you
and raises you to your feet,
and strokes your dishevelled hair,
and holds you,
holds you,
holds you
close and tenderly before he vanishes.

-Denise Levertov
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  #42 (permalink)  
Old Jan 22, 03
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Join Date: Jun 2002
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this took me a while to think of...but this is it...i hope you like it

roses are red
violets are blue
rave rave rave
i love you

now that's talent.
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Old Jan 23, 03
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LIONEL RICHIE - MY LOVE

I've been through so many changes in my life woman
It's a wonder I ain't lost my mind
And I ain't never said how much I need you sugar
But I sho' need you by my side

( Chorus )

My love, just thinking about you baby
Just blows my mind
My love, just thinking about you baby
Just blows my mind all the time

Life with me I know for sure it ain't be easy
But you stayed with me anyway
And even though you ain't gonna lose too much by leaving
I'm so glad you stayed

( Repeat chorus )

You've been my friend and you've been my lover, oh lord
Hoeny you're everything I need
You've made my love so strong now I know where I belong
Oh girl you'll never have to worry
Oh baby any more, any more

( Repeat chorus )
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Old Feb 12, 03
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Just a Kiss ~ written by "Trinity" everypoet.com

My arms reach to encircle you
hands sampling skin.
Eyes closing for that first taste of you.
Concentrating
on the soft brush of lips.
Velvet.
mmmm...closer.
Tongue hesitant to intrude,
riding the seam of your mouth.
Then slowly in
to the delicious heat
of you.
That I could somehow capture
the sweetness of you,
your strength,
convey the need for you.
And with that particular glide of tongues,
make love
to your mouth.
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