Go Back   FormKaos: Board > General Discussion > Coffee Lounge
FAQ Community Arcade Today's Posts Search

Coffee Lounge Talk amongst other community members.

Reply
 
LinkBack Topic Tools Rate Topic
  #1 (permalink)  
Old Feb 24, 03
Miss~duB
 
Join Date: Jun 2002
justa~gurl is an unknown quantity at this point
release?

the sun is shining
tied to nothing by a string
no where to go
standing against the ocean breeze
cliff crumbles to the rocky belows
waves crash and push up towards her
back beconing her to the glowing horizon
hair is blowing..the breeze is warm
slowly she smiles as she leans back
arms out stretched as
her troubles fall away...
the string is broken
Reply With Quote
  #2 (permalink)  
Old Feb 24, 03
kickitliketae-bo
 
Join Date: Oct 2002
Ragga_Wh0re will become famous soon enoughRagga_Wh0re will become famous soon enough
very dark and descriptive :) i adore this poem keep up the good work!
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old Feb 24, 03
Miss~duB
 
Join Date: Jun 2002
justa~gurl is an unknown quantity at this point
thanks.... =o)

the imagery just came to me when i was listening to a song (6 underground) so i wrote it =o)
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old Feb 25, 03
kickitliketae-bo
 
Join Date: Oct 2002
Ragga_Wh0re will become famous soon enoughRagga_Wh0re will become famous soon enough
werd i get fucked up images in my bean 2 when im listening to music
Reply With Quote
Reply


Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -7. The time now is 07:44 PM.


Forum software by vBulletin
Circa 2000 FNK.CA