finish this poem!!! :)

[Breezy]

finish this poem without telling a story~ use imagery! yayyy


Drowned out by the rain
The man upstairs
Wept all night
From swollen storm clouds
Heaven's tears illuminated by the
street lamp overhead
____________________
leaning into __________
____________________
_______ blue windows
and bare branches
__________________
_________________
the white stairs~

[sidewayz luv]

Drowned out by the rain
The man upstairs
Wept all night
From swollen storm clouds
Heaven's tears illuminated by the
street lamp overhead
as he sat there alone
leaning into the twilight
dreaming of
tear stained blue windows
and bare branches
he hears something below,
and death mades his way up
the white stairs~

[sidewayz luv]

yaeh I de know...I tried...

[Ragga_Wh0re]

Drowned out by the rain
The man upstairs
Wept all night
From swollen storm clouds
Heaven's tears illuminated by the
street lamp overhead
a whore screaming droned on ontop his bed
leanining into agony
extacy sweet bliss
naked nipples
sex tantric
she glides upon
the white stairs

need mo line

[SomeGuy]

Drowned out by the rain
The man upstairs
Wept all night
From swollen storm clouds
Heaven's tears illuminated by the
street lamp overhead
Shines gloomly with a yellow array,
leaning into his bed with creeping hands,
darkness and nigth are at hand,
grimm daunting blue windows
and bare branches
slowly cause fear and fright,
oh thank god for
the white stairs~

[SomeGuy]

^ hmm.. mine sucks.. I like yours sideways luv :)

[Cowboy]

Drowned out by the rain
The man upstairs
Wept all night
From swollen storm clouds
Heaven's tears illuminated by the
street lamp overhead
soak a man
leaning into himself
And gazes into
Tinted blue windows and bare branches
Which mask a dark path
That only leads
To the white stairs


iono...

corrie

[cinist]

and thats why violets are blue and roses are red

[zarlon]

Drowned out by the rain
The man upstairs
Wept all night
From swollen storm clouds
Heaven's tears illuminated by the
street lamp overhead
his eyes fixed on shadows
leaning into each other
the aftermath of the day's events dwarf
skies of blue, windows
and bare branches
against the seemingly innocent,
yet oddly malevolent slope of
the white stairs

[munky_no_fun]

Drowned out by the rain
The man upstairs
Wept all night
From swollen storm clouds
Heaven's tears illuminated by the
street lamp overhead
Life's grasp keeps time frozen
Leaning into deaths first frost
A chill creeps over and crystlizes
the stained glass blue windows
and bare branches
break the pallid silence.
With these last moment i follow
the white stairs~