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Old Jul 11, 01
.:Cracker-Jill:.
 
Join Date: Jun 2001
TiSty~ is an unknown quantity at this point
a new day

his voice breaks my daydream
and i come into the world
remembering the intense heat on my body
the ice cool lemonade at my side
and the shady trees around me

i look up and see the great sun
whom i have prayed for
all the dark windy winter long
and look towards him

i let my fingertips touch
his sunkissed skin
he takes my hand and says
"over here"

as we walk down these old stairs
wood creaking paint peeling
we stand in white sand
glimmering like a million jewels
and as fine as the most expensive silk

i listen and i hear the ocean shore
calling and teeming with its life.
i walk with him
calm
serene

we look off into the horizon
for a new day is hiding there
and we wonder what surprises it may hold.
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Old Jul 12, 01
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Join Date: Jun 2001
starburst is an unknown quantity at this point
aawwww!

your poem is so good!
it gives me a feeling of relief and love
also a feeling of reborn hope.... me likes!:027:
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Old Jul 13, 01
..::Tweedle*Dum::..
 
Join Date: Jan 2001
Glendita* is an unknown quantity at this point
That peom is really good , made me remember the time when i felt like that.
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