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Old Jun 05, 03
Human has GORILLA HEART!
 
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Where werewolves fear to tread I did a-wandering go,
Through dale and glen for many miles
I quickly trod with no respect for nature’s law.
I came upon a path and then I took it slow,
I knew that somewhere in this land
There stood a man with broken hands,
Whose mighty countenance impressed
Upon the solid earth itself.
This man I seek has something I must know.
What it is I cannot tell
If secret plan or magic spell
Or words to unseal the seven tombs
With directions to their treasure rooms
All this I could not tell you
For I do not know myself.
And for my journey nothing have I to show;
For when I came upon the throne
Which this mighty man had owned
I found but a copper crown,
Faded rusting green and brown.
This man had not been here for years
And though I’d battled many fears
To know what I must know,
This mighty man I search for still.
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Old Jun 06, 03
i really look like this!
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
didn't know you wrote poems! they're all very good, though I'm too tired to thoroughly comment on each individual one... great stuff there!

keep writing.
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Old Jun 06, 03
Human has GORILLA HEART!
 
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i don't write much poetry/prose, I just couldn't get to sleep a couple nights ago so I decided to write about it, and I took a whole slew of painkillers to deal with my side and it help inspired my creative process. i feel shame for writing now, thinking about erasing them all, for some reason destroying things I make is satisfying in a way. but it's too late now, too many people have seen it and know, it's logged in caches and I also have a hard copy, it's not private enough to eliminate.

thanks for the compliments.
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Old Jun 06, 03
i really look like this!
 
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yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
eww you just wrote something that reminded me of something that some one else said, some one whom i think should DIE DIE DIE BITCH SLUT BITCH
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Old Jun 06, 03
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i have a mixed feeling relationship with my 'art' or what have you, it's usually a lot more fun making it than the final product. or if not fun, interesting. blah blah blah.
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Old Jun 06, 03
i really look like this!
 
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yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
BLAH BLAH BLAH
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Old Jun 06, 03
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yup, here's my new poem:

blah blah blah, blah blah
blah blah blah blah?
BLAH! blah blah blah
blah blah blah;
"blah... blah blah blah"
blah blah blah blah
blah blah blah blah

blah blah blah.
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Old Jun 06, 03
i really look like this!
 
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yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
blah blah blah blah blah
blah blah i-o-no blah blah
blah blah blah blah blah

it's a haiku.
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Old Jun 06, 03
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i love it.

i'm just in a desultory mood today. i'll probably think i'm the shit when i read them at another time.

i don't think f'n'k is too big on short fiction or poetry for some reason though, i just wanted to see all those little periods in a triangle.
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Old Jun 06, 03
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yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
I RUINED YOUR TRIANGLE
muahahaha

i'm so bored... waiting for the gym RAWRAWRAWR
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Old Jun 06, 03
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you did too, you ungeometrical bitch.
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Old Jun 06, 03
i really look like this!
 
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yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
yeah well at least I'm not a geometrical bitch!

how COOL is it to be geometrical
pfftt!
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Old Jun 06, 03
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you're just not hip to the new culture Takeuchi. geometrical is in.
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Old Jun 06, 03
i really look like this!
 
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yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
Geometrical was out long time ago P-o-c-h-a-c-c-o. Asymmetrical is the way to go.
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Old Jun 06, 03
Human has GORILLA HEART!
 
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geometric doesn't denotate symmetrical, there's tons of asymmetrical geometric forms. for instance, my triangle was a right angle, but it's general outline was asymmetrical no matter which angle you approached it from.

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so there.

[edited_out : wrong word, me dumb]
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Old Jun 06, 03
i really look like this!
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
okay whatever mr. geek, it's all the same to me!
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Old Jun 06, 03
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your response
while not a normal shape
could still be considered
geometrical.
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Old Jun 06, 03
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Your poetry is lovely
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Old Jun 06, 03
i really look like this!
 
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yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
HOW CAN DISCONNECTED LINES BE GEOMETRICAL

your RETARDICAL!
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Old Jun 06, 03
Human has GORILLA HEART!
 
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geometry, wouldn't you agree
is a branch of mathematics,
that deals with lines and circles and such
but not with quadratics.
and if you were drawing most normal shapes
for lines there's no recourse.
how do you determine where lines go?
why, with points of course!
and so you see if you want to be,
drawing precision squares;
the point is very neccessary
for you to draw it there!

[edited_out : forgot words. duh.]

Last edited by [edit_out]; Jun 06, 03 at 06:31 PM.
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