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Old Jul 16, 01
prangin' out
 
Join Date: May 2001
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hazel silence [poem]

staring into my heart
i want this to
end
over with done we fall away from sight
hide in my silver loft
away from the stars
being serious has never meant so much
i fly with the golden arrows
saving them one at a time
i love to swim
bask between the stars
beneath the clouds they sing
songs of thought and hate and lust
inching into desperation
rocks thrown through yellowtinted glass
piercing holes through my brain
if i could
save one of you
the sky would scream my name until raindrops burnt holes through my cheeks

but only cause i wish i could do something about this.
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Old Jul 16, 01
aka "Cyrus"
 
Join Date: Jul 2001
Candy-Kid is an unknown quantity at this point
wow. I liked it. I usually hate poems and crap. I thougth it was deep. Good uhhh images.
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Old Aug 01, 01
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Join Date: Jun 2001
starburst is an unknown quantity at this point
this gives me an image of floating through stars....
the image you would have if you were a child..

i know thats not the meaning of the poem....but yeah..thats the imagery it gives me
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