miss green

[watscum]

i stood there in a trance, miss green
while you bathed in Demeter's Pond.
such beauty i had never seen
or ever thought so fond.

but alas there was your faithful mate
wading at your side,
enthused, i was, to learn the fate
by which courtship would abide:

you disappeared behind thick hedge
and frolicked on 'til dusk;
in his embrace, at forest's edge,
you basked in his sweet musk.

i saw him kiss your softened brow
as you'er cradled, to and fro,
and then i heard his solemn vow
to 'never let you go...'

i watched him do what i'd not dare;
rich passion filled long night.
your gentle moan raised every hair
i had, in sheer delight

i crept up close, so fervently,
and gasped ever so slow ;
your body- bright with ecstasy-
lay quivering, head to toe.

then with your last euphoric groan
you brandished quite a smile,
and said, in much a playful tone:
"i saw you all the while."

[sNyx]

watscum.. really?

[watscum]

well its a dreamscape...what do you expect?

[.muffy.]

dood you should write romance novels

[Ragga_Wh0re]

that reminds of this one time when... :hehe: nicepoem

[MistressSpankME]

Myles... shut it.

That was seriously fucking hawt.

I'm deffinately impressed, and so are my wet panties *rawr*

By the sounds of it you have a little voyeur in you, is that true??

[watscum]

^^ :PartEkid:

well, i surely do have voyeuristic fantasies. mind you, in the original draft, i created a much darker, sadistic ending. i altered it a few months back to make it appropriate for public viewing :)

it is, after all, totally fictitious. her name simply portrays the envy she represents through the narrator's eyes- hence 'green'.



anyways- mistress, you continue to entice me :)

[MistressSpankME]

I have voyeuristic tendencies as well, however I am a gemini so I have both sides in me. I'm probably more of an exhibitionist than a voyeur myself.

And I'd like to read this other ending, it sounds even MORe interesting.

[Jingles]

Girls go so gaaa over this time of thing

Demeter, ponds, boys -- good show honey, beautiful rythym and such a fun ending.....

[watscum]

mistress:

"and with your last euphoric groan
you slipped into a dream
but without your love i'd die alone
so i killed us both, miss green"

[Chet]

hey man you got some talent
you and godessa should team up
and write a one hell of a fucked up porn

[Ragga_Wh0re]

/\ur brilliant