Swirls

[Lil'Athena]

soft whispers calling me, casting dark shadowz.
swirls of deep blue fill my vision and cloud my mind.
raindrops fall down my cheekz, thunder crashes above me.
surrounded by lost dreams, sorrowz and unanswered prayers
my feelings are only of purity, and hope ...
riddled with resentment.


~ ATHENA (Darling)

[Breezy]

this is very nice... nice imagery thu which your feelingz are portrayed.. the last line sorta sticks with u.. very well written dawling, hehe... I'd like to see summore of ur poemz~!

~breezy