Can't sleep

[Chet]

muddled thoughts run through my head
loud enough to wake the dead
who, with cold claws pull me down
till in confusion I start to drown
I do not feel tired, but wide awake
and nothing subsides this horrible ache
the need to walk or run or flee
from brain pollution, plaguing me
tossing, turning in my bed
I can't remember what she said
or what he did, how long ago
what to hide and what to show
this plus that, who gives a shit
seizures of the mind, a mental fit
searching, seeking, whispers, creaking
people speaking, my thoughts leaking
out of my grasp, yet still remain
in my head, teasing my brain
sleep will not come, to my bed
while muddled thoughts run through my head

[galaxie]

*impressed*

[cheeseburger]

*not impressed*

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[yoko*]

alternating between stressed and unstressed syllables always make a good rhyme.

[Jingles]

Insomnia...I can't get no sleep ...
those kyrics run through my head a lot when i peer over at the clock and it's two in the morning and i have to get up soon yet I have yet to enjoy any lovely sleep

Dumb ass thoughts keep me up
and I can't shut them up...I hear ya :)

[Lostcause]

I told you I loved you ryan....come back to bed.

[Ragga_Wh0re]

thats what happens when i do e. My brain wont shut up so i end up givin it a good ol` tuggaroo then i can sleep. MASTURBATION:cures ALL ails.

nice poem by the way

[Chet]

Originally posted by ~*goddessa*~
thats what happens when i do e. My brain wont shut up so i end up givin it a good ol` tuggaroo then i can sleep. MASTURBATION:cures ALL ails.

I tried that first
2 times

didn't work

[Sammy Skillz]

wow...i'm impressed

nice. i wish i could write poetry

-s.