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Old Nov 04, 03
.lick it.
 
Join Date: Jul 2002
juice is on a distinguished road
.puddle of me.

i pealed it back for u
my skin
and u examined all my seams
pulled loose the threads
strand
after
strand
watching me fall in to pieces
on the floor
a puddle of me
after u
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Old Nov 08, 03
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Join Date: Mar 2003
Goat has a spectacular aura aboutGoat has a spectacular aura about
imagery is really strong for this, as is the layout.

Great Job.

sad

write on.
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Old Nov 17, 03
*meeeeeeow*
 
Join Date: Aug 2003
starkisses is an unknown quantity at this point
i really like this one!! Goodjob! :keebler:
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