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#1 (permalink)

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Nov 04, 03

juice

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.lick it.

Join Date: Jul 2002

juice is on a distinguished road

.puddle of me.

i pealed it back for u
my skin
and u examined all my seams
pulled loose the threads
strand
after
strand
watching me fall in to pieces
on the floor
a puddle of me
after u

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Nov 08, 03

Goat

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Join Date: Mar 2003

Goat has a spectacular aura about

Goat has a spectacular aura about

imagery is really strong for this, as is the layout.

Great Job.

sad

write on.

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Nov 17, 03

starkisses starkisses is offline

starkisses is offline

*meeeeeeow*

Join Date: Aug 2003

starkisses is an unknown quantity at this point

i really like this one!! Goodjob! :keebler:

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