.take a sip.

[juice]

in my bed
we quench our thirst
arm in arm
we lay
with pupils fixed
i drink u up
trap u with closed eyes
i lean in
and from u're lips
i take a sip
slowly
softly

[Goat]

didn't get so much out of this as the other one, the ending leaves you hanging, personally (and remember, this is just a dirty fuckin ravers oppinion), i'd add try expanding it a little further.

has great potential

looking forward to anything else you have to post.

write on.