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Old Nov 19, 03
Starbaby
 
Join Date: Mar 2003
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Living Lies:

I didn't write this poem with vocabulary or structure in mind, I just wanted to get my thoughts out and the rhyme scheme seemed to work so I went along.


Living Lies:

Take a drag
Hold my hand
Approach with me this other land
bite your lip, flash a smile
make them think it's all worth while
have a drink, rail a line
mask the world for a short time
pearly teeth, cheap perfume
clouds of smoke
consume the room
engage in talk, flip your hair
act as though you really care
call a cab
arrive home
once again you're all alone
take your pills, wipe the tears
forget your soul has disappeared
drift away
close your eyes
mask your life and all it's lies;
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Old Nov 19, 03
kickitliketae-bo
 
Join Date: Oct 2002
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^nice i can relate.
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Old Nov 19, 03
You are the air I breathe
 
Join Date: Jun 2003
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Wow, that's amazing. I think I know a few people this relates to and they have the same outlook on it as well.
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Old Nov 22, 03
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Join Date: Nov 2003
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wicked poem shadi
keep it up man! :moon: lol
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Old Nov 22, 03
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Join Date: Oct 2003
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/applause, shadi
:)<3
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Old Nov 26, 03
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Join Date: Nov 2003
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Nice Work!


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