.hollow.

[juice]

i feel artificial
when i try to touch you
brushing against
your synthetic skin
is a plastic paradise
for us who are hollow
looking for someone
to fill the void

.daniel.

[Goat]

this is good. better than good actually. i'd love to see more added to this.

nye, were you at plaza, spikey hair, raver and such and such?

[Rayeine]

i really like this, great job. I would also like to see more added.

[~*faeryfly*~]

wicked writing! :kimmie:

[Pussy_Kat]

VERY GOOD
wow ur pretty talented

[juice]

thanx all :)

how is it that u wanted more added ? i came up with a few more lines. but would like to know more of u're thoughts before i go any further.

goat: nope, i wasn't at plaza on new years.