Razorblade Kiss

[Dice_]

Razorblade Kiss

Tongues entwined,
Dancing,
Racing,
Blood flows.

Cutting deep,
An intoxicating mix,
Of pleasure and pain,
Salty, metallic, and sweet.

Pain and pleasure,
Hand in hand,
Mouths move,
And blood flows.

[Ragga_Wh0re]

wow tyler im impressed :trippin: a pretty dope poem...WITH NO SPELLING MISTAKES :o:o:o

nice one :smoke1:

[AstroFemme]

yaaaa i'm totally impressed kid!! good job. that shit it hot.

kim

[juice]

i like the style in which this is written......u've got good diction. it's simple, with no excessive words ...... yet it still drips of sexy *applauds*