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Old Apr 23, 04
MOOOOMOTHERFUCKERMOOOO!!!
 
Join Date: Dec 2002
Flip is on a distinguished road
A little crush....

I see your face dancing through my dreams
We sit so close, yet we're on different teams
When I see you sad, my heart suddenly sinks
Always wondering what this beauty thinks
So soft and sweet like ice cream in the sun
I practically melt, when I think you may be the one
So affraid to ask, incase the answer is 'NO'
But if it were 'YES', my spirit would glow
I feel timid like a rabbit running in fear
Each and every time you come near
The curve of your lips, when you crack a smile
The swerve of your hips, freezes me for a while
Lost in a sea of feeling and thought
A hope and a wish is all that I've got
To hear you laugh at something I said
Your giggle chirps like a bird in my head
To hold you close and know that you're mine
Would be so much finer than a well-aged wine
If it's winning your heart, I'm up to the task
Just one chance is all that I ask

If only you were mine

My sweet, sweet Caroline






So I wrote this really stoned at work today, and after re-reading it I've decided that it's kinda trite and typical, and not all that great. It sounded better in my head at the time, and I never write while I'm stoned. I kinda wrote it about this girl I work with that I kinda like, and was planning on giving it to her, but that would probably make things kinda awkward between us, unless of course she's swept off her feet and into my arms.
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Old May 13, 04
yar
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
messejesse is an unknown quantity at this point
aww

tanya n I saw u on the skytrain........hahaha
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Old May 13, 04
The Orginal Trance Addict
 
Join Date: Dec 2002
trance4life is an unknown quantity at this point
haha thats a pretty damn good poem $
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Old May 14, 04
MOOOOMOTHERFUCKERMOOOO!!!
 
Join Date: Dec 2002
Flip is on a distinguished road
Quote:
Originally Posted by messejesse
tanya n I saw u on the skytrain........hahaha
I'm not sure how I know you guys, but you shoulda said HI! I know I may look all big and intimidating, but I'm actually rather friendly don't be shy.

Oh and about 2 days after I wrote that, the chickie I wrote it for got fired and I haven't seen her since. Shitty deal :(
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