-+-Nature and Death-+-

[Breezy]

RE: Nature and Death (a poetic reply to a poem I read)
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Kill ourselves and once we do
These problems are no longer true
For what it is we may perceive
Is deep within, our own disease
By killing everything bearing pain
We wash the stain, but still it rains
Our blood may be washed away
But it will flow another day
These wounds on you I see are deep
The world you live in makes you weep
But as the forest fades away
Each plant and creature turns to grey
Watching what amongst them grows
Lit from within, a mystical rose
Autumn leaves that fall nearby
Hate within them, their own lie
And if these words I say aren’t true
Then I’m a lie, so kill me too~

~breezy

[justin]

you're work is awesome bry, :) i cant ever do anything with a rhyme sceme, you got it down :) good work