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Old Jun 07, 04
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Some short poetry

A Beautiful Crystal
I slit my wrists
Release the warm flow of life
Rising from within me
My love
My hate
My pain
My sorrow
All run down my arm
A river of thick red
And I pray for a better nothingness

Tuesday
I dream of a second chance
Of righting my wrongs
Fixing my mistakes
Instead I leave crushed
Wanting to cry
Wanting to bleed
Wanting to die
You reach into my chest
And suffocate my heart
I can’t breathe at all
Then I gasp for air as you release
Eventually I rise from darkness
To forgot you two forever
And I can breathe again

Death
Sheets of rain fall from the sky
Heaven has been crying since dawn
He stands silently in the darkness
Night has fallen and the moon is nowhere
He’s not wet nor is he dry
He is an immaterial shadow
As ancient as time itself
Shrouded inside his black cloak
He is Lucifer’s right hand
Feared by most people
Welcomed with open arms by others
His bloody scythe in his hands
He has never take a single breath
He never will either
But he has taken the last breath of many
It is his job and his sole purpose
For he is Death
And you will meet him too
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Old Jun 07, 04
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suicidal?
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Old Jun 07, 04
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lol no I'm not

one might wonder tho eh? I just felt like posting something so dug through the archives of stuff i've written. The top two were "I've just been dumped" poems. You know how those can go
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Old Jun 07, 04
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....im in my dark place!

its cool beans but u might wanna spell check it some words were looking like broken english:)
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Old Jun 08, 04
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these are alright.
using words like "bleed, die, pain, hate,love, sorrow" etc tend to make people come across as angry teenagers.

Death was objective but could use a little work.
regardless, keep on writing :)
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