Junglist Rhyme

[OzziusAtreides]

A Work in Progress....

I've augmented my ability to flow with the synergy
Willin me to spit rhymes with dope dexterity
Allowing clarity to float down and set in
Giving substance when the cypher begins

Verse remains vague it's meaning esoteric
Enlightenment gained when it's born through merit
A cleric of human nature inner self no more a stranger
Tearing sequences apart I plunge into danger

Spiritually intricate I spittin this
Becoming serious when I am dropping all of these lymerics
Voraciousness contagious when you read my pages
Brought to present by sages of rages from ancient ages

They listen but don't hear it they're arrogantly ignant
Skimming over lyrics when the ink is my spirit
Tagalog to Sanskrit secrets locked in a casket
The truth is made clear by prophets seen as bandits...

[Ragga_Wh0re]

good flow,i guess imma be "ignant" hurrrrrrrr and say i think you could go into greater depth and detail about what your speaking of.
I get the just of it,but its just that.
Fragments of great ideas that SHOULD be expanded upon.
Dont get your panties in a wad either, i sincerely mean this in a non confrontational way.

[OzziusAtreides]

I think I saw you at Lotus last nite.... wearing all black?

[Rytalin]

here we sit basking in the universes symmetry
pity that not many see the inner beauty that I see
syncronized fractalized galactik geometry
operating as the back bone of humanity

[Ragga_Wh0re]

Originally Posted by OzziusAtreides

I think I saw you at Lotus last nite.... wearing all black?

if it had long curly hair and a castro on thatd be me.

[Rayeine]

i really like this.