stream of conciousness

djmarkpaul · #1 (**permalink**) Nov 28, 01

expression is what expression does.

relativity, creativity, balance & strength: snap crackle and stop my mind.

cry me a river, drowning in salt water, salt makes you sweat.

water is wet.

don't.....

.......hold....
....your....
........breath; for too long, or you won't be strong. We all carry on and move along. feeling as though there's nothing wrong, so that's why we go insane. not everyone will know what's in game.

roll the dice.

checkmate.

gameover.

markpaul :086:

bob · #2 (**permalink**) Nov 28, 01

i dunno if u should've stolen the title from a five for fighting song...

oh well...

djmarkpaul · #3 (**permalink**) Nov 28, 01

it wasn't stealing if it happened to be coincidence.

and a stream of conciousness is a literary term for the expression of random thought so it wasn't really there's to begin with.

Do you have anything to say about the poem atleast?

markpaul :384:

djmarkpaul · #4 (**permalink**) Dec 03, 01

Thanks Ah Puch, but why, WHY!?!?!?!?

markpaul :384:

spunsugar · #5 (**permalink**) Dec 06, 01

yeah , everything fits together and it does mimic a stream of conciousness in that each idea flows into each other and seems to be cronological but ... so what? what's it supposed to be about? It nice to read but that doesn't make it good.

Lindsey