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Old Aug 10, 04
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"touch"

step back and watch me fade into the background.
reach out and see me pull away.
speak words that fall on these deaf ears,
sorry love but i gotta walk away...

...i cant understand why im still here,maybe i like the way it burns.
id search for answers in the tender touch of your finger tips, if i could just let myself BE for a while...
but everytime you put your hands upon me it feels too good and I gotta break away.
Not granting myself 5 meager minutes, to juust enjoy something that now means nothing but used to mean so much.

im still bound by his fist,even though i do not let him "touch".
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Old Aug 10, 04
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Normally I dislike you very much on FNK due to your strong personal pointz of view ...

Although I respect you very much for posting worthwhile stuff like this to read on FNK :)

Thank-you
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Old Aug 10, 04
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hate the persona...not the person.
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Old Aug 10, 04
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hate the persona...not the person.
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Old Aug 10, 04
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That is totally true ...

How long have u been writing for?
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Old Aug 10, 04
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since i was 8.
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Old Aug 10, 04
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Good job ...

Keep it up.

And make sure to post more of it on FNK!

Itz truely great opening up a thread to read something which actually has meaning to it. As opposed to just random nonsence :)
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Old Aug 10, 04
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uhm guy if u do a search with my user name in the creative forum you`ll find oodles and oodles of goodies.
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Old Aug 10, 04
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That meanz oodles of reading ...

By the way my name is David :)
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Old Aug 10, 04
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hi david, im that lady guy valerie you hate...you know because im a bitch and stuff :)


anyways some of the pieces ive written over the past couple years are worth reading, its kina cool to see how my writing style has progressed over the years,well atleast to me anyways. I found my "niche" for a while, and i was stuck in it up until late last year, so nnow im trying a new approach and im not sure of it but yeah.
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Old Aug 10, 04
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Always be sure of yourself ...

There is no " not sure " !

Confidence = success :)
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Old Aug 10, 04
kickitliketae-bo
 
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^can u be anymore cliche?

:P
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Old Aug 10, 04
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Join Date: Dec 2002
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Quote:
Originally Posted by ~*goddessa*~
step back and watch me fade into the background.
reach out and see me pull away.
speak words that fall on these deaf ears,
sorry love but i gotta walk away...

...i cant understand why im still here,maybe i like the way it burns.
id search for answers in the tender touch of your finger tips, if i could just let myself BE for a while...
but everytime you put your hands upon me it feels too good and I gotta break away.
Not granting myself 5 meager minutes, to juust enjoy something that now means nothing but used to mean so much.

im still bound by his fist,even though i do not let him "touch".

Scared to open my arms, my heart, my eyes
I see the truth but lie to myself none the less
I breath, just to feel the shudder run up my spine
My head explodes like a rocket reaching into space
No place for me here
I'm lost
I've found my reason, my way
Why have you been hiding from me all this time
Take me away, not tomorow, today!
Stop the games, I'm through with your shit, tell me the truth
Only I have the right to lie to myself, no one else shares that privelege
My greed takes over
Run or stay, make your choice
Live
Before I drag you down with me
Sinking
Sinking my teeth in and tasting the reason I lost hope
Fear
I fear nothing, but.....
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Old Aug 11, 04
kickitliketae-bo
 
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^u make me want 2 chuck it in yaaaaaaaa
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Old Aug 11, 04
MOOOOMOTHERFUCKERMOOOO!!!
 
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/\So ya wanna do me or what? You put the "dick
" in "predicktable!" So why haven't I nailed you yet? Playing hard to get? You? Not bloody likely! Um, there was no particular reason behind the response I wrote about youre poem, it just sorta came out of my mouth. I'm sure you know all about things coming out of youre mouth...
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Old Aug 12, 04
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yeah like puke and gobs.
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