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Old Dec 17, 01
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Join Date: May 2001
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Xmas spirit yO!

Â* The Raver by cookie

Once upon a nightclub sounding, while I hard-stepped, hot and pounding,
Over many a loud and pulsating record of musical lore --
While I twinkled, nearly tripping, suddenly there came a coughing
As of someone gently snorting, snorting b'hind the bathroom door.
"Tis some kandy-kid," I muttered, "snorting b'hind the bathroom door--
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Only this and nothing more."

Ah, distinctly I recollect it was a strange idiolect
And every seperate dialect turned to dance upon the floor--
Sadly I thought of the morrow;-- vainly my friend had sought to borrow
From myself encased by sorrow -- sorrow for my lost Eeyore--
For the plush, depressive donkey whom A. Milne named Eeyore--
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Tail-less here forevermore.

And the bumping, hard-house ballet action of the gourmet d.j.
Thrilled me -- filled me with fantastic urges never felt before.
Even though, through the beating of the song, I stood repeating
" 'Tis some kandy-kid treating himself b'hind the bathroom door--
Just some kandy-kid treating himself b'hind the bathroom door;
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* This it is and nothing more."

Presently my lungs felt stronger; hesitating then no longer
"Hey," said I, "You there, truly your addiction I implore;--
But the fact is I was dancing, and I noticed you 'enhancing'
And so quickly you'll start trancing, trancing b'hind the bathroom door;
And someone's waiting in line" -- Here I opened wide the door;--
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* A toilet there and nothing more.

Deep into that toilet peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing;
Doubting, thinking thoughts no junglist ever tried to think before;
But the music was unbroken, and the strobe light gave no token,
And the only word there spoken was the whispered name "Eeyore?"
This I whispered, and the toilet murmered back the word, "Eeyore!"
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Merely this and nothing more.

Back into the main room turning, all my soul within me burning,
Soon again I heard a snorting somewhat louder than before.
"Surely," I said, "surely there is something in the vent beneath me.
Let me see then, underneath me, and this mystery explore --
Let the crowd be still a moment and this mystery explore; --
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* 'Tis the vent and nothing more!"

Open here I flung the bathroom, when, hit by smoke and hot strong perfume,
Out slumped a sickly raver of the old school days of yore;
Not the least attention paid me; not a minute danced or stayed he,
But with the mien of someone shady; sat outside the bathroom door--
Sat upon a chair of metal with his feet right near the door--
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Slumped and sat, and nothing more.

Then this white-nosed kid beguiling my tired fancy into smiling,
By the colorful decorum of the countenance it wore,
"Though thy hair be green and purple, thou," I said, "must snort no herbal,
For it creates a verbal hurdle most certainly, I am sure--
Tell me what thy name is, and where you bought your cat meds furthermore!"
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Quoth the raver, "Nevermore."

Much I marveled this ungainly teen to hear discourse so plainly,
Though his answer not much meaning -- tiny relevancy bore;
For I cannot help agreing that no living human being
Ever yet was blessed with seeing kid outside the bathroom door;
Kandy-kid upon a metal seat outside the bathroom door
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* With such a name as "Nevermore."

But the raver, sitting lonely on the crooked chair, spoke only
That one word, as if his soul in that one word he did outpour;
Nothing farther then he uttered -- not an eyelash then he fluttered --
Till I scarcely more than muttered, "Other kids have K'd before--
By the last song you will leave here, as we all have left before."
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* The boy replied, "Nevermore."

Startled by the rhythm broken by a new set roughly woken,
"Doubtless," said I, "what he utters is his only stock and store;
Caught in some unyielding k-hole, senselessly bringing to him a goal,
Followed fast and followed faster till his head one burden bore--
Till the dirges of his hope that melancholy burden bore
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Of 'Never--nevermore'"

But the raver still beguiling my tired fancy into smiling,
Straight I wheeled a cushioned seat in front of kid and bathroom door.
Then upon the porc'lain sinking, I betook myself to linking
Druggy unto druggy, thinking what this old school kid of yore--
What this grim, ungainly, ghastly, gaunt, and passing-out kid of yore
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Meant in mumbling "Nevermore."

This I sat engaged in guessing, but no syllable expressing,
To the boy whose fiery eyes now burned into my bosom's core;
This and more I sat divining, with my head at ease reclining
On the back wall's velvet lining that the lightsticks gloated o'er,
But whose velvet-violet lining that the lightsticks gloated o'er,
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Eeyore shall press nevermore!

Then, methought, the air grew denser, someone lit a stick of cancer,
Puffs of angel dust whose sparkles swept across the littered floor --
"Wretch!" I cried, "To your home take thee -- because your drugs thoroughly baked thee--
Respite -- respite and nepenthe from thy memories of Eeyore;
Quaff, oh, quaff this kind nepenthe and forget this lost Eeyore!"
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Quoth the raver, "Nevermore."

"Junkie!" said I, "thing of evil! -- Junkie still, if man or devil!--
Whether heaven bent, or whether home life tossed thee here ashore-
Desolate yet all undaunted, on these chemicals enchanted,
In this club, officer haunted -- tell me truly, I implore --
Is there -- there sanity in your head? -- Tell me -- Tell me, I implore!"
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Quoth the raver, "Nevermore."

"Junkie!" said I, "Thing of evil! -- Junkie still, if man or devil! --
By the lasers that flash above us -- by the song we both adore --
Tell this kid who's bracelet baring, if, because of someone caring,
I shall find my depression faring stuff'd donkey named Eeyore--
Find my depression faring stuff'd donkey named Eeyore!"
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Quoth the raver, "Nevermore."

"Be that word our sign of parting, boy or fiend!" I shrieked, upstarting --
"Get thee back to dancing, far from the bathroom furthermore!
Leave no white trail as a token of the lie thy soul hath spoken--
Leave my jungle music unbroken! -- Leave the seat next to the door!
Take thy eyes off the ceiling, and take thy form from bathroom door!"
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Quoth the raver, "Nevermore."

And the raver, never blinking, still is sitting, still is sitting
On the metal chair at the club just outside the bathroom door;
And his eyes have all the seeming of a demon's that is dreaming,
And the light-show o'er him streaming throws his shadow on the floor --
And this boy from out the bathroom that has trash all o'er the floor--
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Shall be lifted -- nevermore!
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Old Dec 18, 01
how high are the stakes
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
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muahaha i cant believe i read all that :) i like rofl
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Old Dec 18, 01
oh no
 
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Superb.
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Old Dec 20, 01
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that was awesome!!. :107:
good stuff..~
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Old Dec 24, 01
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Re: Xmas spirit yO!

[quote]Originally posted by Tiësto*s_Girl
[b]Â* The Raver by cookie

Once upon a nightclub sounding, while I hard-stepped, hot and pounding,
Over many a loud and pulsating record of musical lore --
While I twinkled, nearly tripping, suddenly there came a coughing
As of someone gently snorting, snorting b'hind the bathroom door.
"Tis some kandy-kid," I muttered, "snorting b'hind the bathroom door--
Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Â* Only this and nothing more."







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