Hope

[LeeBrat]

Hope

Please take these wings
make them whole
purify her empty soul
bless this prayer she prays tonight
make her wrongs turn into rights
and through the darkness
let her see
how beautiful the world can be



-natalie

[broken_angel69]

Natalie, you have too many damn talents for your own good. Awsome poem hun! You should put some of your others up.

[LeeBrat]

^^*blushes* aww, thanx hun, i think i will put sum more up eventually:)

[broken_angel69]

^ Anytime hun :D

[ty_guy]

Originally Posted by broken_angel69

Natalie, you have too many damn talents for your own good. Awsome poem hun! You should put some of your others up.

i must agree, Nat you are way too talented. that is an awsome poem:077: and you should post more of them

[LeeBrat]

lol, you guys are flattering , your making me blush :P

[sungoo]

I think it sounds smoother if you took out all the "and"s

[LeeBrat]

^^ i never thought of that, but ill give it a shot, thanx :)