windmills

[surfacing_X]

I sit and laugh

Laugh

At nothing.

Nothing at all.

I sit and wait

Wait

For nothing to come.

Laughing and waiting is all I can do

All I can do is sit.

Laugh

Wait.

My mind is laughing at me because of

Nothing.

I sit and think

Thinking is what makes me laugh.

And I’m laughing because I’m waiting for

Nothing.

Nothing finally comes

And makes me laugh,

because it is exactly what I

expected

Nothing.

The windmills of my mind

Spin

And I just

Sit

Laugh

Wait

Think

For nothing

About nothing.

[Ragga_Wh0re]

I dont like this,its too boring,not descriptive enough.

[surfacing_X]

yea i really dont like it either... it was a forced assignment in english wheni was in grade11.....

[Mr.Wrong]

well fuck you two, i like it......jerks.

[Only_Glory]

i like it as well
there is obviously a hint of originality in her style

[Ragga_Wh0re]

I dont think its original at all,to the way the stanzas have been set,to what inspired her to write this piece.
I mean grade 11 english assignment or not,she could have done better.

[{dC!}]

Who cares Valery?

[Ragga_Wh0re]

^shut the fuck up david,and talk to me when your voice has actually cracked child:)

oh and ps: I CARE.

thanx.

oh and pps: ITS SPELLED VALERIE.

thanx.

[surfacing_X]

hmm if anything i thought this peice was orignal....

[Only_Glory]

Originally Posted by ~*goddessa*~

to the way the stanzas have been set,to what inspired her to write this piece.

and those are some reasons why i thought it was original

[ty_guy]

i enjoyed it. kinda had a flow but didn't at the same time while still keeping some sort of flow to it. appears original in my mind:319:

[surfacing_X]

^ thank you! :)