Rake

[CodaDrummer]

I felt it hit me.

Center of attention? No.

A filter for everything going on around me. If I found something that I didn't like, I changed it... and you didn't even know.

Euphoria? Possibly.

Being aware of this new purification is more like it. This power slips away, and fast. It leaves you with so much to think about. How were you able to handle it? Your heart reminds you of where you have been.

Sleep? No.

A dreamy consciousness. These vivid images are almost too much. Your filter has been removed and everything pours out of you.

[Ragga_Wh0re]

chop it up more,use more punctuation,then it will be most excellent my frand.

[LeeBrat]

wow, i really like that one too=) very talented. and yes^^what she said.

[broken_angel69]

wow..... thats awsome

[CodaDrummer]

Originally Posted by ~*goddessa*~

chop it up more,use more punctuation,then it will be most excellent my frand.

I do agree with chopping it up. It all came to me in one big lump sum, so I thought it fit.

[CodaDrummer]

Ok, so I edited it. After looking at it for a bit, I thought this is the way it should appear.

[LeeBrat]

wow, thats awsome. =) it deffinatly adds more of an impact they way you re did it...:)