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Old Feb 24, 05
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Eden @ 3am

i walked the other evening
down deserted streets
rain my only companion
and as its soft caress
reminded me of lovers past
i dreamt the dream of reverie

in it I could see the moments
that had captured my mind
and defined my existence
those brief instances that
had been special enough
to burn into my mind

the soft pitter patter of rain drops
brought to mind footsteps
of babes and brides marching
to war against a life
they alone had the courage to live

I began to dream of futures coming
as the moon broke through the clouds
and the sweet scent of new air filled
my mind like heady wine,
and then
I remembered that the best moments
come not from dreams,
but life.


I sat awhile on a bench
listening to the silent city
cry out for its people,
cry out for its havoc
it felt oh so empty then,
so desolate
like a forest of concrete and wood
stone and wire made just for my wanderings
a technological eden, spread out before a new adam.

I laughed then, turned on the radio
and drowned out my thoughts
and brought life back to the world
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Old Feb 24, 05
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everything you write is so fucking beautiful and light hearted,i envy you.
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