some poetry i wrote

[oliver]

God is a DJ *

sketchable

etchable

chemical collectibles
these brushstrokes form
a watercolor Wonderland
candy wrapped from tip to toe
(Alice up to her elbows)



wandering

watching

jaded jungle dancing as
jesus spins the vinyl bible
twirling twisting tribal
the congregation writhes
all the while waiting (against)
for the modulation of daylight

p r o m i s e d i m p e r m a n e n t p e r f e c t i o n

sun scrapes the oily

canvas




clean




* title is from Faithless "God is a DJ"
Any thoughts, comments? Thx for reading :)

[Sammy Skillz]

you shouldn't publish it in a book with that title ok? because then you'll get sued. because you STOLE it from Faithless.

[Peter Pan]

I like it :Power-P:

[oliver]

yah, and im quite aware that the title is from faithless, that was intentional. I thought that title summed up the content in the poem ok? just for you i'll put a little disclaimer in.

[Sammy Skillz]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHHA ok thanks!

it's a good poem nonetheless ok

[yoko*]

I really like the rhythm in this one...

;)

"sketchable

etchable

chemical collectibles "

[Moon]

more like a rap
hahaha