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Old Jan 30, 02
Extra Crispy Beats
 
Join Date: Dec 2001
oliver is an unknown quantity at this point
some poetry i wrote

God is a DJ *

sketchable

etchable

chemical collectibles
these brushstrokes form
a watercolor Wonderland
candy wrapped from tip to toe
(Alice up to her elbows)



wandering

watching

jaded jungle dancing as
jesus spins the vinyl bible
twirling twisting tribal
the congregation writhes
all the while waiting (against)
for the modulation of daylight

p r o m i s e d i m p e r m a n e n t p e r f e c t i o n

sun scrapes the oily

canvas




clean




* title is from Faithless "God is a DJ"
Any thoughts, comments? Thx for reading :)

Last edited by oliver; Jan 31, 02 at 01:18 PM.
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Old Jan 30, 02
O.G. Sammy
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
Sammy Skillz is an unknown quantity at this point
you shouldn't publish it in a book with that title ok? because then you'll get sued. because you STOLE it from Faithless.
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Old Jan 31, 02
Dagger Raver
 
Join Date: Jan 2002
Peter Pan is an unknown quantity at this point
I like it :Power-P:
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Old Jan 31, 02
Extra Crispy Beats
 
Join Date: Dec 2001
oliver is an unknown quantity at this point
yah, and im quite aware that the title is from faithless, that was intentional. I thought that title summed up the content in the poem ok? just for you i'll put a little disclaimer in.
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Old Jan 31, 02
O.G. Sammy
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
Sammy Skillz is an unknown quantity at this point
HAHAHAHAHAHAHHA ok thanks!

it's a good poem nonetheless ok
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Old Feb 01, 02
i really look like this!
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
I really like the rhythm in this one...

;)

"sketchable

etchable

chemical collectibles "
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Old Feb 20, 02
K-Pryde
 
Join Date: Jan 2002
Moon is an unknown quantity at this point
more like a rap
hahaha
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