Track I made.. (elektro breaks?)

[Goodfellow]

Ok I don't know exactly what this is, I guess breaks with an elektro twist.

Turned out pretty cool. not totally done but close enough.

I also made a housey/breaks type track turned out pretty crazy. can't say I've heard house breaks before? Ill post that one up later when its done.. anyway.

http://www.myspace.com/mcgoodfella14

called "dark rhythms" for lack of better name.

[firestar]

Originally Posted by GoodFlow

Ok I don't know exactly what this is, I guess breaks with an elektro twist.

Turned out pretty cool. not totally done but close enough.

I also made a housey/breaks type track turned out pretty crazy. can't say I've heard house breaks before? Ill post that one up later when its done.. anyway.

http://www.myspace.com/mcgoodfella14

called "dark rhythms" for lack of better name.

I'm gonna have a listen when I get home today mate. :D

[sNyx]

where's the boom, the kick, something to hold my attention? sounded like upscale elevator music. kudos on the creation, I couldnt do it, but no replay factor here. sorry.

[LastWerd]

Yea, it is missing a few things but it's def a work in progress!
I am totally into electro now. Keep it up :D

[firestar]

Yeah mate, what she said. I am liking "it was that girl" though. You should be flaunting that one mate! Simple yet effective.

[Goodfellow]

yeah it was like half done when I posted it up I should have waited till I finished it

meh I was just experimenting with different sounds .. I should stick to hiphop hahah I thought it sounded better than friggin elevator music though, maybe its just these huge speakers that make it sound good :P

[t-skywalker]

jordan i liked it...yeah it was a bit simple but it has a dope beat. i love electro thats pretty much all i listen to......this is that walking or chilling type of beat....cant wait to see what else u come up..i know it will only get sicker!! thanks babes

[firestar]

Originally Posted by GoodFlow

yeah it was like half done when I posted it up I should have waited till I finished it

meh I was just experimenting with different sounds .. I should stick to hiphop hahah I thought it sounded better than friggin elevator music though, maybe its just these huge speakers that make it sound good :P

Jordan is it? Mate, don't let critisism take you away from making breaks. I agree Synx was a bit harsh mate. Trust me it's tough to produce tracks that EVERYONE likes. Impossible actually. So take this critisism, listen to what people have to say and work and work until you feel right about the track. And if you feel like you've made the fucking smashing hit, don't let anything get to you, because you know you're happy with it.

You're hiphop tracks are dope. I have produced hiphop as well, and those tracks you've got there have potential. Take that experience into your breaks tracks. Don't let shit on fnk stop you from doin whatchu do mate.

[tiedye]

hahaha, that kind of reminds me of one of the tracks I'm fucking around with right now...

some advice I can give you is that I'm finding my tracks are too empty and lacking a hook. More atmosphere to set the vibe of your track, and something to keep people from skipping ahead in your track to see if it gets better.

This is just coming from a dude working on his first two tracks, mind you. But I'm a musician too, so it kind of crosses over, I think.

[Goodfellow]

updated version** just added a couple things and tweaked it a bit

still not sure what else I should do , Ive been monkeyin around with atmosphere and different riffs Ill figure out somethin

[Goodfellow]

Originally Posted by firestar

Jordan is it? Mate, don't let critisism take you away from making breaks. I agree Synx was a bit harsh mate. Trust me it's tough to produce tracks that EVERYONE likes. Impossible actually. So take this critisism, listen to what people have to say and work and work until you feel right about the track. And if you feel like you've made the fucking smashing hit, don't let anything get to you, because you know you're happy with it.

You're hiphop tracks are dope. I have produced hiphop as well, and those tracks you've got there have potential. Take that experience into your breaks tracks. Don't let shit on fnk stop you from doin whatchu do mate.

Cheers man , it's all good nothin really bothers me.. I just have fun creatin beats and if people don't dig it that's chill.

Just wait till I get vocals on the hiphop stuff (have way more where that came from) .. Im still waitin on my soundcard to come so that my preamp/mic will sync properly

hell maybe ill bust some vocals to the electro action ahhah