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here's the answer to the post you deleted.
you could start by making it not suck.
ok ok, srsly tho.... it's SOOOOOO boring. a kick, plus hat, plus synth stabs =/= tune. the stabs need reverb and decay so there isn't such a drastic difference in the noise floor between each stab, it'll make the whole thing a lot smoother. try adding more drums. one kick gets really annoying. the progression of the tune needs to happen faster. eg bring the kick in earlier in the intro of the tune. add some weird random noises even to make it more exciting.
thats about all i can say about it for now
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