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Old Jul 22, 04
The.House.Brothers
 
Join Date: Apr 2003
~god~ is an unknown quantity at this point
Life that still allures.

When sun plunges the sea, there comes an exquisite glow in the darkness. There comes an unexplainable ambiance to take over the clatters. There comes silence.



Your beautiful blue eyes gaze into darkness. It spits tears because it can not see. The gentle breeze captures your golden hair in an uninformed approach. Your skin is pale. Dead. The cheerless heart forgets to function. Your skin is whiter than snow now. I try to hold you, but who dares to disturb a feeling so deep? You fall back in the sand, so unconscious.

There is a moment of dead silence. A state of absolute uncomforted mind. This moment is when you solicit for death. You could not even comprehend that death would offer such sorrow in such brief moments. You lay still with no movement, except for the tears which pour down reluctantly.



You abruptly fold your legs and cross your arms. I see your eyes widen and your lips detach. I feel your heart pumping. Pumping so fast, it is now trying to make up for its absence.





Then you bawl from the bottom of your lungs, and out of those beautiful eyes. The silence is broken with your cry, which can surely crack the dark skies. I sit there beside you, repentant, and useless.











There is nothing much I can do now.

I hope you forgive me.

Last edited by ~god~; Jul 22, 04 at 09:03 AM.
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Old Jul 22, 04
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Wow, thats deep. I love your choice of words, they get an excellent amout of emotion out.
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Old Jul 22, 04
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Join Date: Dec 2003
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yes WOW...that is, really ..meaningful. I agree with tina nice choice of words.
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Old Jul 22, 04
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Join Date: Apr 2003
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Are you and your husband fighting again god?
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Old Jul 22, 04
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Join Date: Jun 2004
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Holy shit that is really really deep.

Nice bro.
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Old Jul 22, 04
The Man behind the scene!
 
Join Date: Mar 2003
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I have nothing to say other than I wish I was able to put into words emotions like you can very nicely done.
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Old Jul 22, 04
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Euro Dollar is on a distinguished road
very impressive
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Old Jul 22, 04
The.House.Brothers
 
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~god~ is an unknown quantity at this point
thank you.
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