why?

Tea · #1 (**permalink**) Aug 30, 04

dont know why i continue to roll through these muddied waters
that spolil my soul and corupt my heart with an axe of heat.
i miss the beat, flushed out...you bring me down to my feet
how many dogs can a girl meet?

I release myself into sparkiling eyes, i embrace myself and later console the cries.
I try....but fallen and stripped i stumble,
i trust in the weak fumble and get broke,
i try to smile but my muslces can find the jazz and i choke.

You make me ugly, you make me forget my worth
make me give into you...then suffer the hurt
im sorry me for putting you second, i inherited emotion and i regret it

there is no god, no santa clause
only savage animals that tear you down with their paws

I dont know how i can give into you when i know we're not strangers...
we've met before, you wore a mask and took the baby from the manger
made a mockery of my mind, jading my innocence with black lies
made me feel special with words, sweet sexual attempts and tries
now i cry...
because i thought you different then he
now i cry
because your charm has violated me
now i cry because i dont ever think with another again i can ever be
only to wake to emptiness and no eyes dancing in mine to see.

Tea · #2 (**permalink**) Aug 30, 04

please dont ruin my poetry with negativity.

Alias_Grozny · #3 (**permalink**) Aug 30, 04

mmmkay: Impressive

winger · #4 (**permalink**) Aug 30, 04

in my case, replace he with she,guy with girl, vice versa. i can relate to what you said. the poems great.:)

.funktr0n · #5 (**permalink**) Aug 30, 04

yeah, good work!

Like alias grozny said: Impressive!

brokencrayon · #6 (**permalink**) Aug 30, 04

I already said it before that little jackass had to come ruin the thread and will say it again: this was a great poem. very deep and well written.

Tea · #7 (**permalink**) Aug 30, 04

your all sweet and i thank you, this poem really helped me get over my girly emotions.

Kelster · #8 (**permalink**) Aug 31, 04

awww poor tea.

i hope you find a nice boy soon.

robyn · #9 (**permalink**) Aug 31, 04

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Originally Posted by Kelster

awww poor tea.

i hope you find a nice boy soon.

Or learn to live without one? It is possible.

Kelster · #10 (**permalink**) Aug 31, 04

yea being single is fun, i do miss it at times...but experiencing a good guy treating you right for a couple weeks/months ain't bad ;)

Tea · #11 (**permalink**) Aug 31, 04

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Originally Posted by Kelster

yea being single is fun, i do miss it at times...but experiencing a good guy treating you right for a couple weeks/months ain't bad ;)

kelly your a mac, i need to take a few tips from you...there's always dick in your life

robyn: TRUST ME...i do live without one, and i will continue too...your right, its not hard in fact its easier.

djmarkpaul · #12 (**permalink**) Aug 31, 04

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Originally Posted by robyn

Or learn to live without one? It is possible.

All alone in an overpopulated world? Everyone deserves to fall in love. If you own a dildo I don't pity you.

PS

Poem was alright, you could spruce the vernacular a tad, but the feeling I know all too well. Keep your head up, and have a cup of green tea.

ppcock · #13 (**permalink**) Aug 31, 04

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Originally Posted by Tea

kelly your a mac, i need to take a few tips from you...there's always dick in your life

nah, its just up her ass.

MONEY · #14 (**permalink**) Aug 31, 04

hahahahaha

robyn · #15 (**permalink**) Aug 31, 04

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Originally Posted by djmarkpaul

All alone in an overpopulated world? Everyone deserves to fall in love. If you own a dildo I don't pity you.

Yeah, but people drive themselves crazy trying to force themselves into love. When it happens it happens and everyone should just calm the fuck down until that point.

ps - I do. It is hot pink.

djmarkpaul · #16 (**permalink**) Sep 01, 04

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Originally Posted by robyn

Yeah, but people drive themselves crazy trying to force themselves into love. When it happens it happens and everyone should just calm the fuck down until that point.

ps - I do. It is hot pink.

Cool, atleast you won't get hurt. Me, I'd rather cry like a bitch because when you're in love that is most intense shit in your life. Ever cried when you're making love? It's too intense for most people, spoiling yourself with a dildo IMO may ruin that for you.

2 words: tantric sex.

For me that's worth crazy.

robyn · #17 (**permalink**) Sep 01, 04

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Originally Posted by djmarkpaul

Cool, atleast you won't get hurt. Me, I'd rather cry like a bitch because when you're in love that is most intense shit in your life. Ever cried when you're making love? It's too intense for most people, spoiling yourself with a dildo IMO may ruin that for you.

2 words: tantric sex.

For me that's worth crazy.

It's not really that I'm anti love or intensity or whatever, it's more that I'm pro not turning into some whining little girl over something you're probably going to forget about in a week anyways.

ppcock · #18 (**permalink**) Sep 02, 04

porn.. its cheaper than dating.

Alias_Grozny · #19 (**permalink**) Sep 10, 04

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Originally Posted by ppcock

porn.. its cheaper than dating.

this is a fact, and you're an idiot :D

Dr. Doom · #20 (**permalink**) Sep 10, 04

Wow, your overwrought poetry just touched doom were it counts, in his peepee.

Rytalin · #21 (**permalink**) Sep 10, 04

You make me ugly, you make me forget my worth
make me give into you...then suffer the hurt
im sorry me for putting you second, i inherited emotion and i regret it

there is no god, no santa clause
only savage animals that tear you down with their paws

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please dont ruin my poetry with negativity.

hehehehehehehehehehehehehehh

dude.... no negativity here... the irony of those two quotes make me giggly as fuck :D :D :D

Alias_Grozny · #22 (**permalink**) Sep 11, 04

from the ten storey window, head first i jump you.
attach a switch blade to my dick, and then i fuck you.