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Old Jan 27, 06
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Join Date: May 2001
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For all of us who have lost someone...

Sorry about the >, way too tired to edit them out.
The 9/11 theme is cheesy, but I can identify <3

Daddy's Poem
>> >
>> >
>> > Her hair was up in a pony tail,
>> >
>> > Her favorite dress tied with a bow.
>> >
>> > Today was Daddy's Day at school,
>> >
>> > and she couldn't wait to go.
>> >
>> >
>> > But her mommy tried to tell her,
>> >
>> > that she probably should stay home.
>> >
>> > Why the kids might not understand,
>>
>
>> > if she went to school alone.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > But she was not afraid;
>> >
>> > she knew just what to say.
>> >
>> > What to tell her classmates
>> >
>> > of why he wasn't there today.
>> >
>> >
>> > But still her mother worried,
>> >
>> > for her to face this day alone.
>> >
>> > And that was why once
>> > again,
>> >
>> > she tried to keep her daughter home.
>> >
>> >
>> > But the little girl went to school
>> >
>> > eager to
tell them all.
>> >
>> > About a dad she never sees
>> >
>> > a dad who never calls.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > There were daddies along the wall in back,
>> >
>> > for everyone to meet.
>> >
>> > Children squirming impatiently,
>> >
>> > anxious in their seats
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > One by one the teacher called
>> >
>> > a student from the class.
>> >
>> > To introduce their daddy,
>> >
>> > as seconds slowly passed.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> >
At last the teacher called her name,
>> >
>> > every child turned to stare.
>> >
>> > Each of them was searching,
>> > a man who wasn't there.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > "Where's her daddy at?"
>> >
>> > she heard a boy call out.
>> >
>> > "She probably doesn't have one,"
>> >
>> > another student dared to shout.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > And from somewhere near the back,
>> >
>> > she heard a daddy say,
>> >
>> > "Looks like another deadbeat dad,
>> >
>> > too busy
to waste his day."
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > The words did not offend her,
>> >
>> > as she smiled up at her Mom.
>> >
>> > And looked back at her teacher,
>> >
>> > who told her to go on.
>> >
>> > And with hands behind her back,
>> >
>> > slowly she began to speak.
>> >
>> > And out from the mouth of a child,
>> >
>> >
>> > came words incredibly unique.
>> >
>> >
>> > "My Daddy couldn't be here,
>> >
>> > because he lives so far away.
>> >
>> > But I know
he wishes he could be,
>> >
>> > since this is such a special day.
>> >
>> > And though you cannot meet him,
>> >
>> > I wanted you to know.
>> >
>> > All about my daddy,
>> >
>> > and how much he loves me so.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > He loved to tell me stories
>> >
>> > he taught me to ride my bike.
>> >
>> > He surprised me with pink roses,
>> >
>> > and taught me to fly a kite.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > We used to share fudge sundaes,
>> >
>> > and ice cream
in a cone.
>> >
>> > And though you cannot see him.
>> >
>> > I'm not standing
>> > here alone.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > "Cause my daddy's always with me,
>> >
>> > even though we are apart
>> >
>> > I know because he told me,
>> >
>> > he'll forever be in my heart"
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > With that, her little hand reached up,
>> >
>> > and lay across her chest.
>> >
>> > Feeling her own heartbeat,
>> >
>> > beneath her favorite dress.
>> >
>>
>
>> >
>> > And from somewhere here in the crowd of dads,
>> >
>> > her mother stood in tears.
>> >
>> > Proudly watching her daughter,
>> >
>> > who was wise beyond her years.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > For she stood up for the love
>> >
>> > of a man not in her life.
>> >
>> > Doing what was best for her,
>> >
>> >
>> > doing what was right.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > And when she dropped her hand back down,
>> >
>> > staring straight into the crowd.
>> >
>>
> She finished with a voice so soft,
>> >
>> > but its message clear and loud.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > "I love my daddy very much,
>> >
>> > he's my shining star.
>> >
>> > And if he could, he'd be here,
>> >
>> > but heaven's just too far
>> >
>> > You see he was a policeman
>> >
>> > and died just this past year
>> >
>> > When airplanes hit the towers
>> >
>> > and taught Americans to fear.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > But sometimes when I close my eyes,
>> >
>>
> it's like he never went away."
>> >
>> > And then she closed her eyes,
>> >
>> > and saw
>> > him there that day.
>> >
>> > And to her mothers amazement,
>> >
>> > she witnessed with surprise.
>> >
>> > A room full of daddies and children,
>> >
>> > all starting to close their eyes.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > Who knows what they saw before them,
>> >
>> > who knows what they felt inside.
>> >
>> > Perhaps for merely a second,
>> >
>> > they saw him at her side.
>>
>
>> > "I know you're with me Daddy,"
>> >
>> > to the silence she called out.
>> >
>> > And what happened next made believers,
>> >
>> > of those once filled with doubt.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > Not one in that room could explain it,
>> >
>> > for each of their eyes had been closed.
>> >
>> > But there on the desk beside her,
>> >
>> > was
>> > a fragrant long-stemmed pink rose.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > And a child was blessed, if only for a moment,
>> >
>> > by the love of her
shining star.
>> >
>> > And given the gift of believing,
>> >
>> > that heaven is never too far.
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Old Jan 27, 06
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me too <3 ... donno if I should be sad or smiling after reading that though... either way it was very touching.
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Old Jan 30, 06
Mad Acid Pirate
 
Join Date: Jun 2001
Dr. Doom can only hope to improve
Wah Wah Wah So Sad!
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Old Jan 31, 06
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^ and by Wah Wah Wah. He means.
Doom was greatly touched by this post. Sometimes Doom wishes he could be as strong as the little girl is in this poem. :)

Last edited by Kandyapple; Feb 01, 06 at 06:01 PM.
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Old Jan 31, 06
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Thanks for sharing Natalie. I thought it lovely, and it made me cry.
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