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Old Jan 29, 03
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NEW !! Van Prod. DNB Track !!

Soul Spectrum...new track

http://www.members.shaw.ca/sourkids...ul_Spectrum.mp3


check it out !! It's fucken SICK SICK SICK !!!!!!!!

HEAVY HEAVY HEAVY BASS LINES !!!!!

Produced by ( The Sourkids ) ( Dj Alto )
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Old Jan 29, 03
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oops

http://www.members.shaw.ca/sourkids/...l_Spectrum.mp3

that should work
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Old Jan 30, 03
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this song is horrible.

if you want reasons, just ask. i'll be glad to rip it apart.
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Old Jan 30, 03
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:P I LIKE IT !!!
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Old Jan 30, 03
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here's a rundown.

00:00-01:00 were's this bassline?

01:00-01:30 why is he moving the signal between speakers? that sounds like ass

01:30-02:00 meh. someone sure likes echo. fuck this.

then i turned it off.

*curtsy*
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Old Jan 30, 03
STOLE YOUR BIKE
 
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lol
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Old Jan 30, 03
'latinum respect.
 
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no no rawb...


0-1:00- Huh, is this aphrodite?

then there's a really horrid breakdown that wastes 20 seonds of my time


then there's a sample that sounds like it's from Heman, peppered in with a few cheesy synth edits.

Then there's a few minutes of going through different drum patterns..meh..

In general, it's not 'fucking sick'...I've listened to it a few times, and still can't find those 'sick sick' basslines. It's not the worst I've heard [sirk did that when he made a dnb track, but at least the guy was honest about it]. I think with time, and a lot more practice, maybe some better calibre stuff will come out.

k bye.

M
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Old Jan 30, 03
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Good effort but that song does nothing for me. Maybe if i had just dropped a few cappes of e i would like it. Then again, probably not.
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Old Jan 30, 03
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page not found, I love that track.
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Old Jan 30, 03
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the sample was from Transformers... eee-ooo-aaa-errr-ehhh (ok bad impression of the transformer sound).

i don't think that track would mix well at all unless you skipped the pointless noodling and threw it in around 5:00. even if you did, the drums are BORING. boringboringboring. cut them up, do something... anything. listening to a straight amen is like watching your grandparents screw.

nice hook though, and chipmunk chick vocal samples always get points.
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Old Jan 30, 03
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Ok so here's my review.

Nice pads in the intro. Panning is way to hard though. I get the idea, nice effect, but way to hard. It should be a bit more subtle (wrongly placed montors?). Synth stabs are pretty dope. Nice hook. As for the bassline, you took good care of the sub bass, nice and deep. But as for the midrange in the bass you might wanna layer another synth over top of it using a saw(s) and/or square(s) wavforms to add extra harmonics. If that dosn't work out, bring that synth or another up an octave. " Acid Beep" Sound effect and the "buzzer" work nicely but the "buzzer" is too far back in the mix. The break down is too boring. Could have introduced the lead line during the breakdown. As for the lead line, again you could double up on the synths to make it thicker, and bring up the level a notch. As for the beat, a little boring. Cut it up a little more to keep the listener interested. Some more percusion would be nice. The ride cymbals are waaaayyyyy tooooo far upfront in the mix (my ears are bleeding=P).

Overall this track has a great feel to it. Overall levels need alot of work (eq, compression, expansion, mixer levels). I would recomend playing your track on as many different studio monitors, car strero's, headphones, shitty Hi-Fi's as you posibly can to compare the levels, to get a good idea of where your going wrong in you mix so you can change it later. You will also get a better understanding of your monitors when they are compared to the "real world". Overall reverb is not too bad. Last but not least, track structure. Should have followed a "formula" a bit mor closley cause I feel a little robbed not being able to hear the lead line for longer.

Needs work, but I likes. We Must All Die Somtime, that's fuckin great. As for the snarky fucks, you don't have a clue!
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Originally posted by inkster
this song is horrible.

if you want reasons, just ask. i'll be glad to rip it apart.
Well dinkster, I wanna hear one of your tracks. Do you really know anything about this shit? You got no rights. Show some respect for somone who is puting in the effort!

nerd

Last edited by nerd; Jan 30, 03 at 08:29 PM.
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Old Jan 30, 03
'latinum respect.
 
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Yeah, god forbid someone post an honest review!

Sorry, let's just hope people will get better at producing music with constant OMG UR SONG WAS SO DOPE coming from people who don't really mean it..

Great, I can see they're putting in effort and as you can see if you read my entire reply, I said with more time and pracitce they could probably put out some better stuff.

WORD UP G KBYE
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Old Jan 30, 03
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that was horrible.

it put me in a bad mood having to fuckin hear that crappy noise.
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Old Jan 30, 03
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i can't even download it.. so yeah.

SUCKS! :finger:
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Old Jan 30, 03
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Quote:
Originally posted by miss.myra


Great, I can see they're putting in effort and as you can see if you read my entire reply, I said with more time and pracitce they could probably put out some better stuff.

WORD UP G KBYE
Yes I read your entire reply. I know you know he's putting in effort. But if u read my relpy, you would see that the respect comment was directed at the dinkster.

WORD UP G KBYE. That's a laugh.

nerd
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Old Jan 30, 03
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all i gots to say is i give full respect for people who are into producing their own tracks. or even remixing tracks.

and especially if they are from vancouver. honestly i have no fucken clue how to produce. if i hear a song and i like it. I LIKE IT !
i don't try to break it down or anything.

it's ok to give negative n positive feedbacks. thats what demo's n promo's n trials are for.

but show a LIL FUCKEN RESPECT when doing it gzzzz zzz HARDCORE MOFO Bashers on here !!........ never knew.....!!!
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Old Jan 30, 03
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well fuck i cant even hear this damn thing
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Old Jan 30, 03
Human has GORILLA HEART!
 
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dammit I want to hear this so I can experience the wonder and laugh.
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Old Jan 31, 03
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/\ /\


Tim, u RULE!!! lol

at least im out there making tunes and supporting this "scene". And I thought that critisism was to help improve shit, y'all bash like we're all faggots...


peace

http://www.members.shaw.ca/sourkids/...l_Spectrum.mp3 <-- for all who can't dl.
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Old Jan 31, 03
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Tim, u RULE!!! lol

at least im out there making tunes and supporting this &quot;scene&quot;. And I thought that critisism was to help improve shit, y'all bash like we're all faggots...

Sorry big guy. You support shit.

You really don't do anything.

Hell, even I get booked more then you.
Hell, even I throw more parties then you.

I've heard the tracks you've done before. They weren't good. It sounds like you ran your groove box and fruity loops through a ass effects pedal.

BTW Nerd- Just cause he's trying dosen't mean it's a good thing.

You, uh... faggot.
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Old Jan 31, 03
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I just listened to this track.

It's eight mins of a bad loop with worse effects...
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Old Jan 31, 03
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how come i have to make my own music to know that something fucking sucks?
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Old Jan 31, 03
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at least i don't waste every god damn minute on this fag ass board n e ways...

f&kers r juss a bunch jib-tech-warriors...how else do yall stay up at night...everynight...

Ninja BOy - HHC SUX A PHAT A COCK!!! and i can care less if u get booked for little sketch head parties...

fuck van...fuck you...



im out...
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Old Jan 31, 03
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haha. djalto has some very good points there.

well said djalto

j/k, it's backwards day.
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Old Jan 31, 03
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Quote:
Originally posted by djalto
at least i don't waste every god damn minute on this fag ass board n e ways...

f&amp;kers r juss a bunch jib-tech-warriors...how else do yall stay up at night...everynight...

Ninja BOy - HHC SUX A PHAT A COCK!!! and i can care less if u get booked for little sketch head parties...

fuck van...fuck you...



im out...
someone is up past their bedtime!
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