Give me some feedback on my DNB!!!

[monk]

Hey Everyone,

I've been mucking around with loops for a while and recently been trying to produce dnb. I can come up with a decent 16/32 bar loop, but structuring it all together gets so tricky.

http://www3.telus.net/monk/

take a listen...they're rough and incomplete, I abandoned them for a while. It just seems like somethings off...like I'm missing an instrument?