sharing 1 of my poems

[plur_sweetie]

Take me right now
Take me forever
Take away this pain
Give me some pleasure.
Take away these feelings,
Feelings of loneliness and fear
Everytime I get these feelings
Is when I look in the mirror.
I think of what I've become
And what life will be like
But everytime I try to think
My heart suddenly feels tight.
Love has been so much pain
Friendship is all so messed up
Trust is all so fake
I think I've had enough.
How am I supposed to think
That there's more to life than this
When all I do is sit and cry
While my heart feels nothing, and love is missed.
I hold my pillow late at night
Fighting back my tears
No one's here for me... to comfort me
And help me conquer fears.
Time is passing frequently
I feel as if im dying
Every day I just watch time fly by
And continue my pathetic sobbing.

end of this poem...next poem was to my now ex..


There you are
Here I am
We’re so far apart
But I’m still with you
I’m with you in your heart.

Time doesn’t matter
When I’m talking to you
Distance doesn’t matter
When I think about you
I’m thinking of you.

My heart is breaking
My soul is so alone
There’s no more peace
When you are gone
You’re gone.

Will I ever show you?
Show you how I feel
Will you ever tell me?
Tell me how you feel
Please tell me.

Darkness lurks around the corner
When I close my eyes
And start to miss you
Tears begin to fall
They’re falling.

How long must I wait
How long will I feel this way?
Only time can tell
Only my heart can break
It’s breaking.


Can you hear that?
Can you hear my sobs?
Teardrops falling on my pillow
They’re soaking in.

At night time I think of you
To be able to sleep at all
You’re my dream
I’m dreaming of you.
You’ll never know
How much you mean to me
You’ll never understand how I feel
If you believe in true love
I’m believing.

Words can never tell you
How I feel inside
It’s the only way to show you
Am I showing you?


I hope to show you what it means
To love someone so deeply
Because I love you
I’m loving you deeply.

these are my less deep poems...other ones might scare ya'll..lol...but yeah not really good, but my writing let's go all of my feelings i hide.

[Breezy]

that was really nice... poems are great for lettin all the feeling out~ you should join our poetry/lyrics thread in heart to heart~ :)

[plur_sweetie]

Thanx...and I'll be sure to post some of my poems also in heart to heart ;-)

[poohbearhoney]

aaaaawwwwww the last one was so sweet and the first one was alittle sad but those were so good......i wish i could write poems but i suck at them.........i wish some guy would write me poems and send them to me

[plur_sweetie]

Thank you :) I'm working on a poem right now...so I'll probably be posting it :) it's really good to share my thoughts...and to you nice people...=)

[Justin R]

:kam:

Saturday
Clouds in the sky
Laughin so hard
it brings a tear to my eye.
With natural highs,
the sky's the limit
But it all changes
with a quick pivot.
No where to run
No where to hide
Thinking of all who loved you
when you died.
Sad and lonely
you feel alone
It's all over now
We stand alone

[plur_sweetie]

omg that was so awesome! =)

[mushmellow]

all 3 of those are really good...plur_sweetie...u got some talent...i enjoyed those..:)