Fallen

[sungoo]

Did you look inside my soul?
what you saw wasn't real.
If I was beating inside,
I could tell you how I feel.

Forgotten and misplaced
From the pain you created.
My heart turned black
As my feelings faded.

And I know I'll breath,
when your silence breaks
and my pain stops,
and my heart wakes.

But you won't wake me up.
I'm not beating inside.
I don't want to be living,
when my soul has died.

so I'm here under the sun,
while my body is dying.
I'm searching for an answer,
while my heart is crying.

And I'm asking you.
Is there no place for me,
where I may be loved
and my soul can be free?

[Ragga_Wh0re]

wow i am in awe i would like to hug u right now and have a nic glass of gin and tonic :) wow :) ur writing resembles some of my earlier creations :) flourish and grow its stunning :)

[phatisphat]

this is really good, I like it, no I really really like it