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Old Jun 29, 01
myco
 
Join Date: Jan 2001
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dark swirl

I've
never seen the stars

time
rushing past my feet
I don't feel like I've been here
I have no memory
I don't feel anything anymore

take me in your arms
i just want to cry on your sleeve
and sob into you
and tell you that I have no idea what I'm doing
believe in me

they all take me, away from myself

I have no future
I have no past

let us tell each other what we want to hear
and call it love

they'd never understand
there was nothing left to fear
there was nothing to love

meandering my way through them
pretending to believe they could make me feel real


I believe in you
I believe in only you
that is why I drop my gaze

oh but what I could teach you
if I could find the patience to learn it myself

Last edited by oxide; Jun 29, 01 at 10:58 AM.
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Old Oct 24, 03
i really look like this!
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
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Originally posted by oxide


take me in your arms
i just want to cry on your sleeve
and sob into you
and tell you that I have no idea what I'm doing
believe in me
:y:
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Old Oct 24, 03
kickitliketae-bo
 
Join Date: Oct 2002
Ragga_Wh0re will become famous soon enoughRagga_Wh0re will become famous soon enough
they all take me, away from myself

I have no future
I have no past

let us tell each other what we want to hear
and call it love

thats awesome, i can identify with poem all too well.
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Old Oct 24, 03
JUNGALITHP MAATHIV
 
Join Date: Jun 2001
Rytalin is an unknown quantity at this point
Gridlocked psyche
just another battery
scurrying about
riding manufactured matters.

Things were fine
til they cut the tip
off the pyrami(n)d.

The light is still out there
But thru this tainted glass
it is but a haze.

diffused and marginalized
lots do not recognize
when it hits their eyes.

nothing free can be good?
that's the word on the grid.
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Old Oct 24, 03
i really look like this!
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
ps-i dug this thread up out of the blue from 2001.
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Old Oct 24, 03
JUNGALITHP MAATHIV
 
Join Date: Jun 2001
Rytalin is an unknown quantity at this point
Cool.

and now we continue it.
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Old Nov 08, 03
Registered User
 
Join Date: Mar 2003
Goat has a spectacular aura aboutGoat has a spectacular aura about
this is an amazing poem. displacement floats through me in the first half, then hope manifests itself towards the end. Then...displaced and extinguished in sorrows falls.

great read. it was better the second time through.
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