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Old Mar 09, 03
Miss~duB
 
Join Date: Jun 2002
justa~gurl is an unknown quantity at this point
hahah.. this really sux

your flying
but i'm soaring
the wind's change
now i'm falling
so slowly
but too fast
can't stop now
or it won't last
and maybe your right
cause maybe i'm wrong
maybe we came on a little too strong
i can't fight this
though i try
keep this last kiss
to remember me by
to feel my warmth
don't ever forget
just hold me close
while this sun sets
cause by morning
i'll be long gone
busy falling so quickly
(for someone so strong)
into slow motion
with nothing to grasp
except this emotion
and there i'll gasp
drowning in love
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Old Mar 09, 03
i really look like this!
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
yoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the roughyoko* is a jewel in the rough
if it really sucks, why did you post it? no one wants to read something that sucks!
/me throws a fit
:145:

your poem does not suck at all, I like how it flows..
and the subject matter is cute, and relatable. Because it isn't a detailed poem, there's still a sense of ambiguity as to the situation of the speaker... and depending upon the interpretation of the reader, can be applied differently.

i was reading the first bit and for some reason I thought about sex, so there ya go. But maybe that's just me :P

thumbs up, to an easy read! i likey! ;)
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Old Mar 09, 03
kickitliketae-bo
 
Join Date: Oct 2002
Ragga_Wh0re will become famous soon enoughRagga_Wh0re will become famous soon enough
very cute
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