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Apr 18, 03
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Somethings are easy
sometimes its easy
to follow the leader but sometimes its easy to pave the way. Sometimes its easy to dance in the rain sometimes its easy to just go insane sometimes its easy to just write your thoughts sometimes its easy to just read what you've baught sometimes its easy to just give up sometimes its easy to know when to stop sometimes its easy to write the same thing sometimes its easy to be really boring! heh :hehe: 
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Apr 18, 03
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how can you know your a true poet
unless you really show it not to your friends or your foes but to yourself when your all alone. knowing how to just keep going or how to stop with out showing that you've given up all you need is good luck even further down this page will be more of my hidden rage if you only knew what hold inside you'd know that i am alive thriving and striving for inner peace making sure i dont get a disease living in this world makes me a crazy gurl even though this is getting long i would love to just write a song!
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Apr 18, 03
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this must be a spurt-
cause i cannot seem to revert maybe its the man i love maybe its the man above but most of all its me thats involved just writing what comes out of my head how come i cant sing songs instead? someday ill be famous and ill hear you all cus :finger: that little girl was a bitch how did she get the hitch singing and dancing ill be getting all the romancing and ill be rich as rich as the bitch that knows she's all that named brittany spears who will by then be all fat! :tounge1:
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Apr 18, 03
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LOVE
DO you believe in love? maybe not just one- im not talking about true or love at first sight- im talking about love love for your friends your family and your foes know one knows which way love goes it could be at first it could be the aftermath giving and taking could be where its at but right now i know that i have found one of the greatest loves of all of my life he makes me a princess he makes me a queen he makes me happy when ever i'm mean he knows just what to say and when to say it and at the same time i know that he means it we're both different in our own ways but we love each other more every day.
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Apr 18, 03
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feel free to add your own poems-
i know im a freak but i feel like im flowin if you want to add comments go right ahead im feeling like doctor suis (?) with red shoes and blue shoes what ever the suiz- do what you will with my page i think its boredom more than rage. and have a nice day party kids
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Apr 22, 03
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To reach out
to know how far to go I am living this life as if i dont know whats going on in my crazy head life with out him i would rather be dead my work sux cause i got blue hair why cant we express ourselves and live with out fear. To be fired would be worse than retired didnt i know when i got into this mess that i would be the one wearing the dress i know that i need to run the show and this big corperations got to go know that someday they will be shut down and then they will look like the clown make fun of me now behind my back you laugh and you smirk but ill be back little do they know what power i hold little do they know that I am so bold someday they will pay but as for now- i just have to stay. hmmm. rambling jibberish to add to the pile. thanks for stopping by at least for a little while.
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Apr 22, 03
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when this creativity started
i was almost bombarded where did it come from all of this ho hum fidly didly dumdily hoo looking like me makes me feel like a shoe rapidy crapidy pipidy doo dont know know what I can do? Mumble the jumble and ramble the camel- sure- im a little crazy but arent we all?
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Apr 24, 03
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those poems are mad neat!
can you write one about me?? AGROout
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Apr 25, 03
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somthings are easy
like breaking wind breezy somthing easy like shatter dreams freezy somethingsar easy like slashing your wrists somethings are easy like seasing and decsist somthings are easy like verbal projectiale diahreah somthingsare easy like these thoughts no see uhm, somethingsare easy like tellin u 2 shut the fuckup some things r easy like submerging ur head in deep muck somethings are easy like dont even try somethings are easy like ur "verses"makes true poetry die :) we r not in grade 4
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Apr 25, 03
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DEATH!!!
DO U BELEIVE IN DEATH? where a try hard poet rapes till nothings left try do u think u could try? UR"POETRY"makes me want 2 cut off my air supply so straight forward nothing of depth i see through you poetically inept TAKE A BOB CAT TO UR SOUL BOB CAT YOUR SELF TILL U FIND SOMETHING THAT RESEMBLES GOLD till then spare me from such pitiful verse i rob grave yards for meaning i search
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Apr 25, 03
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Your on crack little bitch
cause your rymin like shit i dont even have to try to diss you cause in this case your so young I legaly can't even kiss you- your a baby so go home and cry to your mom your poems are written like you are a slob if you were old enough to see the world like me you would know true poetry behind these eyes there is trueth and if you want to bash that than go fu#k a goose your a little shit and i should kick your ass but we're on the internet and im not like that Cause really- this was just my own thoughts driftin on this page that you had to tear up do you see how ugly you made it? words all over and not even playin Im all about fun and games now you had to go and make me mad and thatjust shows how you really are. So please dont reply- cause i know your gonna make me cry :hehe: just leave it alone and go get a bone. :smoke1:
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Apr 25, 03
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Dear Darling,
are you the one I've been admiring? With your little hot bod and you huge- you know what How could i miss you - even as a slut- I'll take my tongue ring and swerl it round and round until your throbing @#$% is all the way down you taiste like sweet chiken roasted over a fire as ur cumming to conclusions i feel your desire I hear heavy foot steps I think its my mom you've got to hide cause it wont be long u scurry away to go hit the bong cause now your satisfied and im left alone :hehe: -- - - **goddessa**
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Apr 25, 03
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seriously tho i didnt mean to offend but ur rhyming skills are nursery grade, dig a lil deeper u sound like every other "mc" out there :) peaces
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Apr 25, 03
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I understand that everyone should have the freedom to express their mind- and obviously you don't. I was merely writing whatever came out of my mind and through my fingers. Granit, I have never accumulated education for this "poetry" subject- but my dear- I do know how to write freely, what ever it is that is on my mind- I did ask for opinions- but I didn't ask to be told that I am elementry. I am not a lot older than you- but I do think that you are the one who needs to go back to school. Poetry is not something to be taught or learned- it is something that comes naturally- don't fight the flow.
ps- I was never trying to sound like an mc- if thats how I came across to you than cool- that would be an awesome thing to be. personally I think that you need attention- maybe you should try and be the MC- but i dont really think that anything you have written is flowin- most of your stuff is really choppy- but hey- like I always say- to each their own- and don't dog on me again- or I will find you and you won't like it. (and i am NOT the kind of person to be mean- you have brought out a side of me that i dont like.)
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Apr 25, 03
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sorry i just hate it when people post mindless carbon copy poetry
my poems do flow u just dont understand them, and thats ok. Your rhymes are elemntary cuz I was writing like that when i waslike 10 yr old. U post things and people are going to critique them and I did. Now if u cant handle it then quit posting ur poems!
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May 02, 03
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All this poetry is really good , get it published right away!!!
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May 02, 03
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so are you playin me too? i really like your little flying leaves.
if your not playing- thanks if you are playin- ummm... your mean. ;) Thanks for readin my rymess glad to see your having a good time just let it be known that im queen of my own thrown sanda and jaymz are the best of namez peace out to the big trout catch ya on the flip side dont have to hide
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May 02, 03
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Quote:
I've always liked the name Abraham! AGROout
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May 03, 03
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hickory dickor dock
a mouse sucked my non existent cock the mouse said oo as soon as my sex organ oozed hickry dickory dock
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May 03, 03
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Abraham?! Yeah thats nice- heheh
I think dave is a freaking cool name especally if he likes to play the game too bad she's a little hor or else you could do her on the floor just sticker some liquior and then do her quiker but make sure to protect what god made erect or youll go home with more than your bone. *stoned to the bone on a saturday morn* and drunk as a skunk getting with the funk* peace out you g
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May 04, 03
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MAKE IT STOPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD MAKE IT STOPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP *rocking back and forth*
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May 04, 03
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keep writing
never stop listening know that you will never be the best to insult is to show that inside something is missing, something needs fixing. if I play with words and rhthym I'm just having fun. hey god , if you were writing like that when you were 10, what have you been doing since then? going to school? working? are you still writing? if so do you do it to be "A good" writer? because in my humble opinion a great writer instills the courage in others to exspress themselves. To write is to evoke beauty in others, to create. NOT to further ones ego or take pot shots at the heart. please god, tear me apart.
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May 04, 03
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the only thing this "writer" is evoking in me is bile.
Im not insulting just giving my honest opinion sorry if u or others havetaken offence. yah i was writing like that when i was 10 and since then my writing skills have evolved greatly. Yes i am still writing ive posted dozens of poems in this forumn feel free 2 take a look see
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May 05, 03
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I must admit
she is a twit but i will stop because its wrong I threw out my creativity onto this thread of mine for you all to view but not to waist your time the things said were not the best from within my head but i have never had anyone who thinks they are so clever tell me that im childish- so if you want to tell me that i am elementry because my peoms ryme- than take a seat cause i dont care i think they're just fine i didn't really mean to ask for an opinion- but more of an addition- i think that we all work better together what she wrote was more than a poem- it was angry thoughts directed towards me as a cry for attention- and so thats what i gave her- i am NOT mean person- ask anyone- but when someone busts out with words that i cannot possibly decipher- that are mean and hateful- i will buss back- im over it- just dont post your mean little self on here- i have never been offended by an internet discusion in my whole life- and you managed to do it
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May 05, 03
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*this is me crying for attention* :finger:
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