Apr 25, 03
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pave my way
i shiver beneath ur dna
same dna attracts game my way i was just a simple strand in ur genetic make beleive land to think i contribute and distribute to things so obtuse profuse rage rips throughout ur flesh RIP AND TARE ... dna`s left Im not a human being scientifcally documented abomination reproduction relentless i shiver beneth ur dna hideous creation paves my way 
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Apr 25, 03
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I guess my education level isn't advanced enough to understand what the hell your trying to say- I did try and read your "peotry". but it is really hard to read (especially out loud) and no one seems to understand it.
dont ever critize me again- who are you to judge-
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Apr 25, 03
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u have to read between the lines :) im not a strait forward write, sumtimes I am but its not my style, its so boring. I write like this because theres thrill in the chase, but u people seem to have trouble catching it, and thats okay
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Apr 29, 03
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GODDESA that was a really good poem/ryme its really deap.
Forza Venetzia
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Apr 29, 03
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cool rad big upz 2people who r on the same page as i
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