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Old May 03, 03
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Skytrain Poem

So i'm on the skytrain today going from Stadium to Metrotown, and there's some sort of delay at Scott Road station. Now I'm usually pretty patient but I swear each stop took approximetely 15 minutes so I was getting pretty pissed off... and on top of that the man sitting next to me was tapping his foot and that just happens to be a pet peeve of mine.. so I decided to write a poem:

Tap, tap, tap... my impatience grows as his obliviousness succeeds to destroy my sanity;
As I sit on this bench, my eyes can't help but linger to the inconsistant rhythm of his subconsious tool.
I look out the windo into a world that can soothe me but the tapping continues and through the reflection I observe what I dread.
The humming grows louder and I am now on the verge of pulling out my hair, strand by strand to relieve the tension of the tap that has me under its power.

Definetly not one of my best poems, but I hope you find it amusing.
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Old May 03, 03
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Sounds good
soemtimes its nice to express yourself on here
its good for the mind...atleast thats what i think
how about you?
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Old May 03, 03
Starbaby
 
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Yeah I totally agree, its good to get your thoughts out on paper.. or on the computer. Oh and feedback is always good...
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Old May 04, 03
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hahahhaa hey shades! u already know whut i think of the poem, lmao
luv ya :)
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Old May 16, 03
crazy chikalika
 
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LMAO! thats really funny! i like your little quote under you name too- about the bitch.. hella funny..
sorry that you had to listen to the dude tap his foot- but hey - it inspired you-
and- if that happens again- get their name- and ill take em out for ya!
heh
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Old May 16, 03
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im sorry... i tap...I CANT HELP THE TAP!!
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