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Old Jun 24, 03
neophyte hollywooder
 
Join Date: Mar 2003
watscum is an unknown quantity at this point
mother earth, father industry

in a field of poplar, a child once played,
laughing and dancing in paradise made
from a forest untouched. and just as peace endured
fray, and dreams outlived the alluring
break of dawn, a b0nd of child and earth grew forth.

in time, fate would find the child as a young
adult, discovering himself in a world that had hardly begun
to discover itself. child and earth- side by side, hand in hand
to progress and evolve until destiny’s grand
falling out; the child wanted more than the earth had to share.

so that child did age at the burden of earth
for the joy of cheap thrill must have outweighed the worth
of the planet he once loved. poisons spilled
from every facet of his greedy self, willed
by his thirst for more and more and more of the irreplaceable.

earth perished: conglomerates thrived as diversity was destroyed.
and if only the child had not been completely devoid
of all sensibility, his life might have been reflected
in his son's..........


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in commercial filth, a child's child now lies,
sobbing and coughing in wasteland derived
from a forest forgotten. and just as smoke stacks
burn through protest, and loggers never lack
conservative support, a b0nd of child and industry grows forth.

Last edited by watscum; Jun 24, 03 at 01:44 AM.
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Old Jun 24, 03
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Ragga_Wh0re will become famous soon enoughRagga_Wh0re will become famous soon enough
did u write that?
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Old Jun 24, 03
neophyte hollywooder
 
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watscum is an unknown quantity at this point
^^^ on a good night, they write themselves :)
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Old Jun 25, 03
kickitliketae-bo
 
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Ragga_Wh0re will become famous soon enoughRagga_Wh0re will become famous soon enough
wow i am stunned. Awesome imagery and impeccable choice of words.
KUDOS BUDDAY!!!!:D
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