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Old Nov 16, 03
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Join Date: Oct 2002
Ragga_Wh0re will become famous soon enoughRagga_Wh0re will become famous soon enough
mimic

what was it?
what is it?
trying to relive it.

but why?
for what,
something only once got to touch.

orgasm lay beneath fingers,
erotic singers
fulfillment not far behind...

...lead lost&blind.

pre conceive me,
by this bind...
...rewind.

hello,
farewell
all too familiar hell.

coat me in lies
you tell so well
so familiar the smell,

longing for the taste
grab me by the hips
grind into fate.

unwrapping this gift,
anxious eyes cannot wait
...oops

Its too late.

Slid before you
...can do`s
do nots...

reciprocated lies,
thicken this plot
leave me not,
amongst those for whom you faught.

Amongst those you dwell,
amongst those you leave uncertain...
...in hell.


lick me from head to toe,
in passionate longing,
did too much belonging...

...question is....
... what was I flaunting?
why did you buy?

reflect this hate,
mimic this lie.
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Old Nov 18, 03
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Join Date: Mar 2003
Goat has a spectacular aura aboutGoat has a spectacular aura about
honestly, i found this really choppy, the idea came across haphazardly, the rhyme scheme is off, and so forth.

you gave me an awesome idea to write about though. :moon:

keep it comin
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Old Nov 19, 03
kickitliketae-bo
 
Join Date: Oct 2002
Ragga_Wh0re will become famous soon enoughRagga_Wh0re will become famous soon enough
^i know i was fucking HAMMERED and skribbled on e when i wrote that :kimmie: i was trying to get some point accross...but what it was i completely forget :hehe:
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