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Old Jan 07, 04
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juice is on a distinguished road
.hollow.

i feel artificial
when i try to touch you
brushing against
your synthetic skin
is a plastic paradise
for us who are hollow
looking for someone
to fill the void

.daniel.
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Old Jan 07, 04
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Goat has a spectacular aura aboutGoat has a spectacular aura about
this is good. better than good actually. i'd love to see more added to this.

nye, were you at plaza, spikey hair, raver and such and such?
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Old Jan 09, 04
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Rayeine will become famous soon enough
i really like this, great job. I would also like to see more added.
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Old Jan 09, 04
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wicked writing! :kimmie:
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Old Jan 09, 04
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VERY GOOD
wow ur pretty talented
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Old Jan 10, 04
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juice is on a distinguished road
thanx all :)

how is it that u wanted more added ? i came up with a few more lines. but would like to know more of u're thoughts before i go any further.

goat: nope, i wasn't at plaza on new years.
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