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Old Jan 13, 04
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prose more than poem

I don’t know what it is about you that makes me ache,
All I know is that in your absence I am weak


You justify my tears,
You make sense of life;
Of happiness


Your essential being hides behind every dark corner
And when I am afraid,
I find myself tripping into a light
That I never lifted my eyelids to contemplate–
I find myself sitting amidst a corridor of my every want,
My every need


I could never plan for the astounding effect
That your blazing eyes sear into my heart


Every time I cry
I am reminded of why tears are so infinitely important;
They still my heart and clarify my thoughts—
Only such emotion can grant the clarity of life,
Of honest and true existence,
Of the great and grand necessity of truly living


I fail to contemplate such frailty in my stilled moments—
When my heart is so overfilling with countless emotions
Of which I can give no name,
Only feel and expel,
This filling of realization unloads my mind
And makes me truly grateful for every single
Meaningful thing placed on the amazing earth


It is so rarely recognized, the infiniteness of life—
Countless flower blossoms,
Crawling creatures,
And compassionate smiles
Fill this earth,
So passed over, it shocks my heart


My realizations come with my unexpected tears
Any tiny drive on this earth can affect a human heart!
This tiny drive has sent my emotions on a shockwave,
Calming down and resting on my lucky thoughts of you.


I would bite your heart if it meant feeling what you feel
I would lick your brain if it meant tasting your sweet ideals
I would swallow your soul if it meant a sole destination with my own


I am uncertain of the generation of thoughts,
Only knowing that to outpour their final product is my hearts desire,
To be fulfilling on this earth
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Old Jan 13, 04
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I give your poem--- :5stars: Two thimbs up--:y: :y:


Excellently done if you ask me.
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