I'm sorry

brokencrayon · #1 (**permalink**) Jan 18, 04

I am bored so I decided to post a stupid little poem thing i wrote a while ago. :toasted:

almost I nstantly
M y sudden
S tupidity
O verwhelms
with R egret
when I R ealize
I hurt Y ou

junglequeen · #2 (**permalink**) Jan 18, 04

i like it
does it need the break though?

brokencrayon · #3 (**permalink**) Jan 18, 04

thanks.. and no it doesn't need the break i was just playing around with how the "IM SORRY" part looked.

Cdn_Brdr · #4 (**permalink**) Jan 18, 04

^I say keep the break... it helps accentuate your point. Besides most poetry can use something different to set it apart.. :)

brokencrayon · #5 (**permalink**) Jan 19, 04

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Originally posted by Cdn_Brdr
^I say keep the break... it helps accentuate your point. Besides most poetry can use something different to set it apart.. :)

thanks. I shall keep that in mind. :)