frustrated with the lack of motivation in this section..

justin · #1 (**permalink**) Oct 10, 01

Cmon people... start posting your writing...!

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Creation & Destruction, Hand in Hand

I watch the freedom within your eyes
My lucid fantasies played out time and time again
A neverending downward spiral
Our exploited lives

I spy the crimes you hide within those unforgiving eyes

Buried deep, Hidden from the rest of the world
Your secrets, your undieing hatred is nestled
I play back your memories, one by one.
They flash and delight, shock and dismay

As i revel in your neverending weakness
I come to terms. I will never be what you claim to be.
I could never live up to those standards.

For I spy the crimes you hide within those unforgiving eyes
And within those disfiguring extremities, I am validated.

Starberry · #2 (**permalink**) Oct 18, 01

Sorry Justin....! I would post but I lost a lot of my poetry when....well, when I lost everything on my comp!

By the way, I just wanted to tell you that I think your poetry is absolutely AMAZING and that you should keep on writing. Honestly.....I am just stunned by the complexity of your writing.....

*Jen*

justin · #3 (**permalink**) Oct 19, 01

Thanks so much jen :) that was one of the best compliments i've gotten :)

Aww jen that sucks that you lost ur stuff :(

i'd love to see some of it :)

zarlon · #4 (**permalink**) Oct 25, 01

Ya, you fuckers better start posting.

Or I'ma beat you DOWN!

:293: wiggerzarlon?